All Comments on 'Dee Praved'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

very good beginning.

You had to make the student and the principal take contro over the teacher, make her wear sexy clothes, stockings, high heels, cuff, collar during school and dominate her totally, but with discretion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Drug companies have spent a fortune trying to create a septum to engage a woman's libido.

And he uses it to ruin a woman's life?

Not very smart. Why not market it and make a very large fortune?

zena99zena99over 8 years ago
Hello!

Hey, this is an MC story. If you don't like it, you are in the wrong place.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Wow that person complaining about nonconsensual fantasies is an idiot.

Great story. Thanks for sharing your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
nice start, your highness...

...but you can't stop now! You simply must...MUST...write more, and tell us what becomes of your sexy protagonist/teacher of Eastern Indian decent. And by the way, that was a very clever way you named her...Ms. Praved, indeed!!!

YOMEYO

casannettecasannetteover 8 years ago
Visuals

Spend some time describing the woman. Was she shaved like a porn star? Or natural? Indian women usually don't shave.

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