by SilentStrength
I've never recieved a manly pedy quite like this one. Where in Texas did you go?
In one page you have me captivated. As a matter of fact, I was just settling back against my pillows and preparing to click to the next page when I saw that there was no more. Argh! So happy that you have several chapters already posted, though! Looking forward to more of this sexy story.
As one of those old men who can't do justice to their own feet I felt right at home reading this. The lovely Asian women who operate those spas are wonderful. Now, it could have been expanded -- it's quite short. However, you can take care of that when you write chapter two. Keep up the good work. -- Jesse