All Comments on 'Demeaned'

Though the actions in this story aren't exactly what I am used to, this author details everything so well in every story that he writes, he places the reader right there as they unfold. Though he hasn't yet included young boys smelling Santa's ass of fucking their mothers, called a woman's ass a non-word like arss, or panties golf pants such as nickers, Mr. Swiftt is probably the best Author on LIT when it comes to detailing a story and helping advise both women and men on what enjoyable sex acts that they are missing.

Well written Peter. Kindly disregard the crap from gutless anonymous pissy people.

I loved reading this story. Very detailed! Keep it up!

While this topic isn’t my favorite, your story was well paced, descriptive, and compelling. Best of all, I did not see that ending coming before that hammer dropped. Maybe I should have, but I didn’t and that’s great.

You know how to get yourself, as an author, out from between your character and the reader, which is very rare and always a welcome surprise.