All Comments on 'Demon Child Ch. 06'

by Xantu

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HonourHonouralmost 16 years ago
A wonderous tale

You have captured the being of these people. This is so different from your other stories but retains the same high quality.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
fabulous!

i love this whole line of stories - each one is leading into the next and getting more exciting. i am really excited to see where this is going to end up.

very outgoing with the new language and such...

Marinetown, USA

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Fabuloso

Nice fable to tell at the end of the chapter. You truly are a great, gifted writer.

DragonDreamerDragonDreameralmost 16 years ago
Wow!

I continue to be amazed at the breadth of your talent. But all the variety in your stories is united by a thread of sensitivity and understanding of human motivations. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Is there more to this story?

I do hope so.

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago
These stories are great

I am enjoying these stories. You are a great author. Creativity and good writing make it a great read. You should try to get it published. Look forward to continuing the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Dry opinion

Slow and boring.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
slow and boring???

Find something else to paw off to then.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
whew...

Great job creating a rich world and compelling characters. thanks for helping confirm that erotic literature is literature first.

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