All Comments on 'Demon Child Ch. 06'

Great job creating a rich world and compelling characters. thanks for helping confirm that erotic literature is literature first.

Find something else to paw off to then.

Slow and boring.

I am enjoying these stories. You are a great author. Creativity and good writing make it a great read. You should try to get it published. Look forward to continuing the story.

I do hope so.

I continue to be amazed at the breadth of your talent. But all the variety in your stories is united by a thread of sensitivity and understanding of human motivations. Bravo!

Nice fable to tell at the end of the chapter. You truly are a great, gifted writer.

i love this whole line of stories - each one is leading into the next and getting more exciting. i am really excited to see where this is going to end up.

very outgoing with the new language and such...

Marinetown, USA

You have captured the being of these people. This is so different from your other stories but retains the same high quality.