Derek's Story Ch. 04

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I walked into Jess's room to find the same shit eating grin plastered on her face that she had donned after our economics exam this morning. I shook my head and gave her a quick kiss on the cheek. I then sat down, preparing myself for all of her questions. Before I was fully seated she started.

"Did you two really get caught in the shower? Do you like her? What color will her bridesmaid dresses be? How was she? What is your favorite thing about her? What do you two have in common? Do you guys think you will have a spring wedding? How many kids did you guys talk about wanting?" She asked all of these questions in rapid succession. I was planning on answering most of them, even though I was a little freaked out about the wedding and kid questions.

Taking a deep breath, I started to answer when Maura burst into the room. She looked extremely pissed for some reason. Before I could even get a word out, she blabbed out, "Yeah Derek, tell us just how long you and Kara have been fucking!"

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Timochka69Timochka69over 1 year ago

Oh no. Abandoned with a cliffhanger :(

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Hmm

Where's the rest of it?

OkieChuckOkieChuckover 5 years ago
why leave us hanging???????????

you need to learn which person is doing the talking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Not long ago in a far far land

Okay so you git me hooked , now keep going , this is really addicting getting dstarted on a good story then it ends way too soon ........!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Ummmmm what happened

Ummmm so it's been almost 2 years are u gonna finish the story or what?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Please continue this story to it's conclusion. That is to have Derek with Kara, or by the last sentence maybe Maura is in love with her brother. Jenelle seems to clingy and a little off. Please finish this great story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I sure hope you are going to finish this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
what a waste

this writer is like all the rest, they start a good story drag it down to the dumps keep promising big secrets then leave the readers hanging. IF you had been smart (which you have proved your not) you would have written the whole story out in rough draft including chapter breaks BEFORE posting anything. then if you had a brain fart like now the readers would not be left hanging. delete the whole series and don't post any more until the whole series is ready to be posted all at once.

homebody_19homebody_19over 10 years ago
Is chapter 5 still cumming??

Fantastic story line. How does Derek extricate himself? Does just tell Kara & Jenelle about each and end up in a threeway? What is Kara's secret is that Jess or Maura or both are also in love with him and are jealous because he hasn't picked up on the signals yet? WOW just can't wait for chapter 5!!!!!

AmungaAmungaover 10 years ago
Chapter 5

Loved the story so far! Whats the status on Ch. 5? Looking forward to it

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