All Comments on 'Deserving Daddy'

I am so intrigued by how your story is building. Great word play and innuendo's. Would like to see more from Lara and Ryan.

To a hopefully artful cruise to inevitable conclusion - perhaps with a surprise as to mom's alienation - this could go so many ways

Awesome new story ;3

I was really enjoying the playfulness that dad and daughter had. I was disappointed to see it end so soon. Hoping for a second installment that is longer because you have a good stepping stone here for something.

Really good and quite believeable except for the language being a bit raw when they haven't fucked yet. Longing for part 2 .

Because Vanilla Extract rarely repeats himself. That means the next story will be in all probability equisitely written ( that's a given ) but it will be harrowing . One half or maybe both sides of the couple will be a bad seed . V.E. loves to proffer a faustian bargain .

The reader will get impeccable ramping up to passion but lurking in background is threat of something going VERY wrong for one or both of two main characters. That worst case scenario is rarely skirted and Vanilla Extract doesn't blink in entailing consequences. One excellent aspect of this individual story that rang universally authentic is the verbal trench warfare between mom and daughter. That friction played a large part of set up.

Anyway, this illicit couple did get caught out and they have some dicey terrain to navigate but long term happiness is conceivable, if not assured. For this consumately skilled author , that outlook is as good as it gets. I thank Vanilla Extract for sharing. Full marks for the down low freaky father and far more overly twisted daughter . *****

This one was different from the rest of your stories, as there was mutual consent without a dash of reluctance. But still I loved it. I really liked that it was long, there was buildup-up to the conclusion, and there was some tension.

I would have liked some more sex scenes, but still, this one is my favourite story.

I feel like such an asshole complimenting the artistic graces of internet word porn, but from a purely artistic standpoint, this is some of your best work. I prefer the non-con rough stuff myself. But credit where credit is due. Well done, V.

This was actually one of my least favorite stories from this author (who I normally love). Not because of the lack of reluctance; I like a good daddy/daughter story regardless of C/NC. But I disliked every character in this story. The daughter was immature, shrill, and reckless. The wife was a bitter, cheating slut. And the father was just weak. He had no personality, no desires beyond wanting to do whatever it took to keep his daughter happy and his wife peaceful. I couldn't even get into the very well-written sex because the characters irritated me so much.

I opted against voting. I won't give a story this technically well-written from a favorite author less than a 5, but I couldn't give a 5 to something I disliked this much.

The sex/teasing scenes seemed like the repeatataion of all of your previous daddy daughter stories.... Enjoyed the plot and the dialogue though

I feel like I have read this already. Is this a repost? Good story though.

I love this story. I thought it was pretty hot and enjoyed the teasing myself. Please keep writing about this two.

Not feeling this story. Didn't like the way she kept baiting them out in front of other people. Didn't like them doing it in stupid places or getting walked in on in the end. Didn't like the vibe of the whole divorce. Just didn't like it. Which is a shame because I've liked everything else you've done.

amazing story and very well written, got me hard, I never heard a girl keep saying "fuck me" all the girls I know hate that word. some just say "do me"

I thoroughly enjoyed this story and its in depth characters! Cant wait to see if there is a sequel to this story! Keep up the great work!

U r an awesome storyteller.. Ur stories never just talk about two people pushing into each other.. It has a lot more but it never feels boring which shows your skills.. Cant wait for the second part..

You know i am just sticked to my phone for like 3hrs, read this story from start to end in one shot, btw i have exams tomorrow wtf im doing here??

Fucking amazing.

You are a very good writer... no doubt... but your characters could be more developed... from one story to the other, it seems they're all the same... your strength is definitely in the plot, the pace and the dialogues... which makes me think that you're a screen writer... anyway, I have tremendously enjoy your stories...

This was great! Loved the banter. But I really miss your old stuff ): the nonconsent stories ): like the links in your bio. Violating mommy and the good sister always got me super wet. Nonetheless, I still love your stuff daddy.

This is fantastic!!

Sweet and sexy! Not as hardcore as some of your other stuff, but lovin' the butter-lube throwback!!

Amazing..this is the non hardcore version of your lexi's diary, I loved both their is a storytelling... Five Star/10 out of 10

she was just idiotic and reckless at every turn ...almost every thing she said took me out of the story completely

Thought Hagatha's the real bitch here. But Lara stole the title.

Definitely want to read the conclusion. Are you ever going to post the rest? I've checked your bio and there's nothing :/ love ur other stories too! :)

this is soooo good, I was never a big fan of Daddy/Daughter incest until I found your fics. Pleaasseee keep writing more!!! AHHH ure amazing :-)

I love this author's stories. Always fun, sexy and entertaining.

Loved it!

The only thing that could make it better would be getting even more! A Deserving Daddy 2!

We need a part 2!!!

I love this story, please I know people want you to write another part to this but don't it can only go down hill. There is nothing left to tell, the only thing that could possibly be left is expanding their partners but I don't feel either of these characters are like that and I like it better that they are only in love with each other. Great story!!!

Rofl!! Well that was Fucking. Awesome. :). Yeah, a part two couldn't top that ending and prolly wouldn't come close to being as good! Love the girl, she was Right on top of the old bitch! Hehe, 'I was just standing here', lol!

That girls tailbone is going to hurt for weeks after fucking on that desk! Hehe.

Thanks for another great story and for sharing it with us! :)

This story was amazing it had me standing alert the whole time one of the best ones I have read so far. Thank you for this.

Overall the story was well written. Invariably However, what is the point of a well written story that doesn't include characters that people like or a decent plot? Let me expand on this, there are only a few other users in the comment section who I actually agree with. Lara (the daughter) ruined the whole thing for me. She was unbelievably stupid and overly horny that it became annoying, is she an animal or a teenage girl? No girl would just constantly want to fuck despite the obvious repercussions of doing it anywhere and anytime. It's just unrealistic. Plus, the father was such a pushover, constantly enabling Lara when she wanted to fuck at the wrong time and in the wrong places, letting her keep talking and basically exposing their secret, giving half of his wealth to a bitter and cheating hoe whom btw was a disgusting excuse of a mother. Also he wasn't just an idiot in general. Lastly, am I the only one who gets so annoyed when Lara's pouts when she I see being told off? Like seriously man, not cute at all. Just makes me wanna bitch slap you girl.

as you said it was long but enjoyable.

I have read 4 of your stories so far and although some can be a little long winded at times, for the most part, they are very enjoyable. I will continue reading your stories as I said they are enjoyable.

Excellent story! Well written. I'll be looking for more!

probably one of the best i have ever read

Excelent as always 5 stars

Really good story. I loved it

This is just how I like the stories I read. With something in it other than just getting to the point and fucking. I always try to look for a story that has a little bit more to it. I have not read a story like yours in a long time. You did an amazing job. I wish I could find more stories like yours. Please keep writing!

Great story. Consistent character building, though maybe a little too hard on Agatha. One negative - Where does it say that one must swear, especially saying "Fuck" over and over, to express intensity of feeling. That doesn't express intensity to me so much as a lack of imagination and facility with English. Try writing a sexy erotic story without having characters express themselves so coarsely. It just isn't necessary, and it is distracting. Note that I did rate the story with five stars.

she's so bratty i love her.

Stupid. Stupid girl. Stupid father

..., the wife catching them. Had to happen.

But who cares!

Lara finally got what she wanted, not just fucking her Dad, but the two of them together. And I believe they can make it work.

And how often do women actually complain about a guy's dick being too big? Not very!

If she tells you "Size doesn't matter.", she's just being nice.

Usually.

Ladies, I know, it can hurt. Don't kill me. ;-)

At multiple times the daughter pissed me off she could of played the part of a good daughter until they moved out. There are some things I would change, but the sex was hot either way.

Too much of the time it seemed like the daughter was more intent on getting off than caring about her father.

She just came across as an immature bitch hellbent on making trouble.

Your Stories are like chocolate.

Bitter, Sweet and very Adictive!

Had a feeling the Hag would show up at the office, at the end, but damn! She's such a bitch! Loved the story!

If you don't write more chapters I may have to take my life lol. Does anyone know any other stories or books like this one?

I had personal concerns about the arc of the story as it meshed with the characters. But damn, the buildup was awesome and Lara exuded a sexiness that would be near impossible to ignore.

Technically, the story was almost perfectly written.

IF, and I'm not asking, you decide to do a sequel, I think that Lara does need some psychiatric help. She is an impulsive, selfish imp and can only bring trouble to daddy.

If they weren't caught till the end, it would make the plot more naughty. Anal sex should also have spiced up the story.

Suggesting...... But it was best

Loved the story

I read it all the way through to the end thinking there would be some sense coming through the story at some point but it never did. I mean, you wrote the daughter as this immature Daddy's girl with an Elektra Complex and I didn't realise until the end but it seems you wrote the whole story as if it was her fantasy. I mean, both the Mum and Dad are both written idealistically, the wife being the 'Hag' and the Dad being the put upon good guy who is his daughters dream lover. There were never any solid arguments and the daughter always got her own way, as though she was actually writing the whole story.

So it confused me. Still it was enjoyable for what it was but I was expecting a little more substance to get me teeth into.

it's okay... but all of that could've came to a head a long time ago, and Paulie, knowing that Lara was at the office, at lunch time, right after Ryan had said that he was going to file for divorce... why would he just parade her in, like it was so great that she just stopped by to see them? Especially after saying what a stuck-up bitch he thought she always was... And quite honestly... why didn't Ryan lock the door, knowing that Paulie barges in?

Love this story

So fucking good we need more!!!! I wanted more action from the dad and daughter. We still need anal and rimjobs etc. I think this is the best one you've written and my favorite ;)

Really enjoyed this story! Please write more!!

It began good but suddenly went downhill for me. The daughter was tooooo immature and bratty. Don’t get me wrong it can be cute sometimes but she got me annoyed when she only wanted to get her way especially when she didn’t know how to keep her mouth shut.

hands down my favorite story from you, i hope you'll write more like this

Liked it but yeah lara was too much of a brat ☺ anyway, I like your style.

Dearest VanillaExtract,

Sexy story with sad, sad characters. Lara is immature, no question there. When children are raised by an indifferent parent(s), they oft time do not mature until much later in life. Couple Agatha's anger and expectations with her resentment of Lara and Ryan for trapping her (unplanned pregnancy and forced marriage) and you've got some serious dysfunction.

Sorry. The unspoken issues in this family dynamic is almost overwhelming. However, I'm certainly going to read another of your entries. You're a very good writer.

GG

You’re obviously a good writer but the characters in this story sucked. The daughter was annoying, the dad was pathetic, and the mom was an unreasonable bitch. If you hadn’t made everyone so un-likable I might have enjoyed this.

The dad was a complete cuckold bitch and eventually will lose the daughter too because of the way he lets her run his life. Also giving his cheating wife half of everything for fucking another guy, fucking Really? Let's not forget sleeping on the same couch his wife fucked the neighbor on that same day. Only gave it two stars and that's with a pity star. Love your other work but this fell flat

Great read. Thank you!

I absolutely loved the story. One of my favorites honestly. I’m sure I’ll be coming back to read this. Thought the buildup was great and even though I totally saw that ending coming, I still loved reading every bit.

Absolutely perfect story. You are an amazing writer, the story and dialogue have great flow and they are pleasure to read.

Can't wait to read rest of your stories, this was my first.

Lara is a nice sassy little bitch, I would LOVE to read part 2 with her and Ryan.

Good job :)

Your a wonderful writer. I came so hard I passed out for 2 hrs. Thank you!

The writing was top-notch, but as others have pointed out, the characters were quite unlikeable. Lara seemed far more inclined to get her father caught than to actually care for him. I believe there was supposed to be a love component there and, yes, I know love can make you blind, but it doesn't make you completely stupid to the obvious repercussions of sleeping with your father - especially after said father sat you down and made it clear how they needed to be careful. Agatha had no personality. She seemed more like a caricature of the terrible wife who fucks around. And then there's Ryan. He's portrayed as weak, both by Agatha's repeated efforts to talk him down and his daughter's controlling actions. At one point, Agatha complains that Ryan wasn't fighting for their marriage when at no point do we see Ryan capable of fighting for anything. Not to mention he doesn't seem bothered by the fact he's laying on the same couch his wife just fucked the neighbor on. That's too much.

All of that aside, there's a lot of fun stuff and I'm going to give it four stars because despite the problems, I read through the entire story and even got off so it had enough working. It's just these glaring issues kept it from being a perfect story to me.

fantastic story I really loved it so damn eroticand believable.. just wondered why paul after seeing you two together didn't try getting in on the scene,your daughter getting humped by both her daddy and uncle at the same time LOVELY

Good story,thumb up.

This is a likeable story. There's a good plot line and the writing is well crafted. The only things I couldn't get behind was that Ryan couldn't fight his way out of a paper bag, let alone for his marriage and his daughter has absolutely no concept of danger. Maybe that's the point you're conveying? As for Agatha, she was a little one-dimensional for my liking. That said, it was a hot story, well written and found myself immersed in it. I've read some of your other work and will make a point of reading the rest. 4 stars from me.

Such unlikable characters ruined it for me. Everybody was so unbelievably irritating. And irritation should not have been the main emotion I was feeling. Not to mention how fake the 'love' actually is. It's all about Lara being a spoiled brat and not one bit caring while the dad has no backbone or opinions to fight for.

Paul is the real MC here he got a hot wife he’s rich he’s the boss of his brother but also a good guy other than bossing his brother around a bit but that’s to be expected. Plus he is ok with the relationship like a good person but honestly I was never into the masturbation stuff and all the cursing so that was a turn off but overall not to bad

Mc couldn't be dumber than a brick, the more i read the more i realized how pathetic he is... Good interactions and love story, i guess. For a guy whos a big manager in such firm MC behaviour couldn't be more of a parody.

This is such a fantastic story by one of the best authors on here. Like some of the other commenters, I thought Ryan was a bit annoying and wish he would’ve taken charge of his bratty little girl more. Also, Uncle Paulie definitely should have gotten in on some of the fun. But, Ryan proved to be the perfect daddy to Lara, and I’m hoping he put a baby in her.

Really stupid ending with Hagatha getting the upper hand again and the loser wx husband acting like a wimp

It started good. Didn't like the bratty daughter though, ruined the whole thing really.

Hated this line of dialogue... "I can take a pill later. All my friends do it." Right near the end too, making her sound like a total slut. Not exactly the sort of innocent little daddy's girl that would have worked soooooo much better.

Hot story, never fails to bring me to orgasm, one of your finest works Keep the good work!

REALLY LONG DRAWN OUT STORY WITH A TERRIBLE ENDING, BEING CAUGHT IN THE OFFICE BY THE WHORING WIFE!!

2 STARS

Waaaay tooo much stupidity and infintile risk taking... ruined the entire story. 1-star

Too long for a story about a weak ass simp husband, cheating wife, and spoiled daughter. Talk about beating a dead horse over the head. Story was over at page 4

Don't listen to the anonymous whiners... this story is fucking hot.

Good idea could be shorter though

I would have liked this story so much more but that daughter was insufferable. The purpose of the brat kink is that the brat and the dom get pleasure in the dom putting and keeping the brat in line. Maybe she just needed a stronger daddy. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

The daughter was just so fucking irritating. The father wasn't much better.

Frankly, the wife was the most likable of them all.

Such a long drawn out trash with a weak wimpy father, a slutty insecure cheating wife and a spoiled bitch daughter

I really like this story! I love the slow burn, I just hope there's a second instalment! I want to read about them getting a house, destroying the "mother" and living happily ever after ❤

Entertaining, but really? Neither one of them has any self control? In real life he would be arrested and she would either be in a mental facility somewhere or having court mandated therapy. Old Agatha would clean up !

Anonymous from two months ago don’t you mean spoiled Bitchy daughter who’s potentially pregnant with her father’s baby

Time for A little running across the house lol

ruined on page one, when we find out the idiot father bought his virgin daughter a dildo to 'practice' with. How fucking sad, such a waste. God, that was lame. Truly awful plot design.

I typically love all your stories, but I couldn't really get into this one. Lara was extremely unlikeable, childish and just plain mean. She was over the top disrespectful to her mother and I found myself just wanting everyone in this family to go their own separate ways.

Nine months later mom’s a grandmother and dad’s a dad/ grandpa ex specially if they way you write it makes it seem like she wants her dad’s baby and she just lying about getting the morning after pill this reminded me of when my boss got pregnant and she said she didn’t think she could get pregnant and I thought that’s what she gets for not using protection or getting the morning after pills

The dynamic between the three of them is fucking hilarious and even though I found it more comedic than erotic I was living for the dramaaa omigod another 10/10!!

PART 2 PLEASE!!!

You certainly had a lot of readers invested, regardless of their rating.

Bad ending but good story. Ending should have been that was a close call again.

So hot 10/10 one thing that gets me tho is if she hates her daughter to much, why does she care that he's fucking her? And why does she want her to live with them when she gets a divorce? #FuckHagatha