All Comments on 'Desi Post Match Entertainment'
by YamiMalik
- 29 Comments
YamiMalikalmost 9 years agoAuthorHuge thanks to everyone who reads my story. This is my first time at writing and any feedback people have would be appreciated. I personally prefer stories with a slow build up so that is what I will incorporate into my work. Will post more as I get around to writing them!
foolscapalmost 9 years agoi think it should have been in fetish and the protagonist is a total loser, at least in my opinion. others will like it a lot.
I don't understand the Indian obsession of turning their wives as whores but it seems to pervade the culture. Even the Kama Sutra has a whole section devoted to how to fuck another man's wife.
No men in India, just a nation of cucks.
Please consider posting in fetish in the future.
thanks for your effort
impo_61almost 9 years agoCommenting the story: 1st - The wife wasn't used to a black cock? His cock was what? white? 2nd - that all happened and wife and husband never talked about it? Not once? Not ever? 3rd - the husband (as a good pimp) should be at the door when the "friend" was ready to leave and collect the money his whore wife had earned. So the story had no dialogue, the plot is bad and the same as other Indian wives...Could be "copy and past"...Ahhhhh, in the title the wife was Desi, in the strory Priya...1*
YamiMalikalmost 9 years agoAuthorMany many thanks for your comments. They are really appreciated.
-'Desi' is the name for indians as a collective group. It is not an individual's name. It is like calling americans 'yanks.'
-The husband is indian. He's brown skinned and his cock is brown not black
-I wrote this as I was frustrated by the typical MMF story being either - wife is an active slut or husband wants wife to be a slut. Here, both husband and wife are passive, only the bull is dominant. The husband does not pimp out the wife as this suggests he is actively doing something - he is actually a bystander who ignores what is going on. This is why husband and wife don't talk, they ignore the situation. I find the situation of a passive husband and wife and a dominant bull to be very erotic.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agovery good story.rated it 5 stars.try not to listen to the retards here,who will mostly say negatives always.
please continue with priya.consider these requests - get more black friends of leroy to progress the story further,on a big match night. dress up priya in Indian atttire like very low , transparent sari and skimpiest blouse for them and slowly strip...
get some tattoos and piercings for priya ,as gifts from her lovers...make her kiss her husband after she gave blowjobs to the group
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoIt's good hoping for a next chapter. I like how the husband kinda sits there. Please don't chamge the aspects of the story
Anonymousover 8 years agoWell written, . It is a true fact in many indian marriages nowadays. Such true stories & support will encourage other husbands to come forward. The hot trend even in small indian towns nowadays is that numerous husbands are encouraging their hot wife's to have sex with another man while they watch.
A real man should be proud of his hot wife and her enjoyment.Indian culture has always recognised in the holy Niyoga system (Mahabharat) that a married woman will enjoy sex with more than one man in her life to be satisfied. Funnily the current pseudo cultural upholders are actually encouraging the old British Victorian prudery
POKAN1over 8 years agohusband bring friend home to eat curry, gr8, friend play with his wife , he sits in fear and say's nothing , friends rape his wife and he sits and turn his face to watch tele, has to an asshole kind of man.husband say nothing to wife after almost two month about her fucking his friend .
real shit head husband.husband who don't fuck there wife , get hit by the BULL horn.
cuckoldloverover 7 years agoThis style of writing is very good. Please write one more story in the same style.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoPlease add more parts.The casualness to it all is what makes the story so sexy.
Rumble1over 4 years agoI agree with anon, I love the casualness of the sex and the way he takes the wife.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoLeroy is not a dominant Bull who takes and fucks Priya whilst she and her husband remain passive. Priya is the aggressor. She catches a crush on Leroy, starts sitting besides him, she checks him out, wears short skirts, shows him her legs, flashes him her panties and teases and baits him into action. She never chides him or pushes his hand away because its exactly what she wants. She lets him touch her legs and finger fuck her then she starts sucking his dick and lets him fuck her. The husband is passive but Priya is a silent assassin. She entices and incites Leroy to take and fuck her before her passive husband. I really like the story and I love Priya.
IFAFILHGabout 3 years agoDumb ass husband..don't just sit there.. get up and follow them upstairs.. and all these weeks he never even once asked wife what is going on...what a stupid dumb ass husband
MRJT79over 2 years agoThis is similar to another story I read, it think on this sight but I can’t find it now.
I like how your story slowly builds and how the husband doesn’t react to what’s happening and how the wife goes along with it all.
The other story involved a work colleague, I think his boss coming over to watch football and fucks the guys wife behind his back. Eventually finds out what’s going on when he come home early from a business trip. If anyone know the name or the author of this other story or can point me in the right direction of it, I would be much appreciated
Agentreaderover 2 years agoI'm also looking for the same story as above.
This is similar to another story I read, it think on this sight but I can’t find it now.
I like how your story slowly builds and how the husband doesn’t react to what’s happening and how the wife goes along with it all.
The other story involved a work colleague, I think his boss coming over to watch football and fucks the guys wife behind his back. Eventually finds out what’s going on when he come home early from a business trip. If anyone know the name or the author of this other story or can point me in the right direction of it, I would be much appreciated
Anonymousabout 2 years agoI really hope you come back to these stories someday. The casualness nature in your stories in something I haven't been able to find anywhere else.
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