All Comments on 'Desires'

This was a great stand alone, that flowed well from chap 8. It gave us a small view into more of the younger characters. It would be just as great if you incorporated more of these characters' emotions into chap 9 or more.

I do enjoy reading all your stories, and I especially like the vampire family and their protectiveness of ALL the wolves.

Keep up the great work IR2R!

5 Stars

Nicci

I would love to read more about this couple. I loved this story, life I love all your in this series. Can't for chapter 9.

Got it. Pondering made clear. Lol. Can't wait for more of their self discoveries.

I loved the addition to the regular story.

I don't know if you have an editor, but you might consider it. There were things that wouldn't show up in spell check, cause they were real words, like beat instead of beta and some word inversions, like 'in him' instead of 'him in'. There were over a dozen that I noticed.

I love your story and the characters developments. I think those are all right on point.

Clarence has no control over the female that came to his home. She invited herself over just like Aria did the first time she went to Clarence's home.

Both has issues they need to work on.

If they are mates then continue on with Clarence and Aria if not I don't think they need a story. Just some snippets of them in the sister story would be good enough for me.

I see a new story developing!!! Keep up the good work!! More please!!!! :-)

I really enjoy Your offerings but You really need an editor.

Enjoyed and will be curious to see if it was truly "just sex" or if you develop it into an extension of this series. If stand alone I hope to see both happy in future chapters of this storyline. Thanks

Fantastic, riveting and sexy. It will linger in my mind with sadness without resolution. Please continue this story!!

This definitely needs to keep going, as well as all of the others. I can't decide which story I want more of first!

Yeaaa this story very much needs to continue

You have to finish this story of Clarence and Aria. I have to know if you end up with them as mates or not!

Clarence is a slimeball, needs his butt kicked.