All Comments on 'Destiny Ch. 02'

by lorraina

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Yeppers

Good Writing, with great attention to detail.So descriptive I felt like I was watching from inside the girls mind. Gripping.

Jetta_WalesJetta_Walesabout 19 years ago
Excellent again!

Another brilliant story and as you have said there is to be a third part I can't help but wonder where this next chapter will take us.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
need work

be more descriptive. don't rush the story so fast during sessions. not very realistic.

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