All Comments on 'Detective Spring Ch. 08'

Look forward to the next installment...the wait will be painfully long since I need it like yesterday. lol

What an awesome story series it would make to have both sets of mated pairs working as a team to get all the baddies great idea Bloodwoman I do look forward to reading that! I am guessing that her were booty call would be first on their list and he would not be to happy to find out she had kept all she is from him and then mated the hot vamp/warlock

Absolutely fantastic story! I'm sad that it had to end, but I'm also happy with the ending. It would have been neat to sort of dive into Alys' powers a bit more, but overall I rate each chapter with 5 stars.

So a great story premise, Ste story was layered and the characters had a bit of a back story. Good right? Well no, not in the end.

The story was set up to be detailed and longish. Just as the story began to take off a 6.5 chapter begening was wound up in 1.5 chapters. There was no middle and the middle IS the story.

So what you have here is character A, B, C and D and these are their names. Then you have, oh no their captured and now escaped. It’s that quick.

I believe that this happened because the author started and then got worried about his or her ability to flesh out a complex detailed story.

1 solitary star.