All Comments on 'Detroit Surprise'

Thanks to everyone that enjoyed the story. Getting alot of added to favorites but few comments here. The feedback helps. Certainly makes me want to add more. So please if you favorite me, just a line or two about why. thanks

Sounds like everyone had a great time. Not bad writing for just starting out. I look forward to reading more of your fiction (or reality). I definitely love to read stories written by the ladies.

This story is more inclusive with more characters. Very hot. I loved the story line of the pick up and then the surprise made it even more hot

Doing the "stranger in town thing" and picking up your own significant other at a bar has always seemed fun I've wanted to try it with my girl. But I LOVE Curt's twist on it, with the surprise for you. Brilliant! I'm definitely going to have to use that idea sometime in real life.

I have done the stranger in town bar pick up with wife. Loved your take on it with the twist. A shorter tale that could've had more sex and maybe a little more dialogue. Not upset with it at all. Just a quick erotic pick me up that is well put together and still has all the best elements-just could have been longer. Read your profile-you are in Michigan too. I dont go that far north but maybe I should!

Now Tiki this is a great story, one of your best so far and I have more to read, it's so well constructed and flows so good, your no messing around style is as always great and to the point, which I love, and you are painting pictures for me to enjoy, omg, I was there! Giggles, well I can wish, lol

Keep them coming, lol

Jean

From the land down under

Finally an author that gets wife sharing correct - with hubby present and involved