All Comments on 'Deviants Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Masterpiece

Keep up this story please.

I recently found your work and I must say, you are one of the better writers I've read on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great writing

I agree with the previous post, you are one of the better writers on this site. Great variety of perspective and awesome situations. Keep it up! Your writing does that to me. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Really good

Best writer on this site. Pleasure to read

AlwaysAndForever82AlwaysAndForever822 months ago

im so confused as to the ending of this story. so Eddie just stayed with the kids? in the spare room? like who confronted who? just like that last few paragraphs were super unclear. also, off the couples, nicole is the biggest bitch I've ever seen and that's saying something considering how many stories I've read.

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