All Comments on 'Devils and Butterflys Ch. 08'

This is a very good story finish it!!!!

I hope you have several more chapters coming!

Intriguing story, well written… but I suggest a proofreader to help you with English mechanics, particularly capitalization and run-on sentences.

i truly miss reading this story..i hope that you plan to continue and finish it. it would be such a waste to just leave it hanging...trs