All Comments on 'Diary of a Rockstar Ch. 01'

Nice mix of description and dialogue.Your story carried me along with it; made me feel like I was in the room watching.

This looks as if it could be great, keep it going.

Love the start, keep going

Well written and very erotic. I look forward to additional installments of this series. Obviously they're your characters, but I'd like to see the young lovers reaffirm their love for each other after their episode w/ the agent/promoter. I'd also like to see them both realize that they really liked the threesome and would like to do more group sex. This leads them into progressively wilder sex w/ ever larger numbers of partners, culminating in large gangbangs and massive bukkakes/gokkun fun.

Great start to this series. I'm curious what Paige and Bobby will get into once at the Warped Tour. How soon will we see the next installment?

Part 2 is already in review, so it should be made available under the Group Sex category and on my own page this week. I appreciate the great feedback!