All Comments on 'Diary of a Wife Ch. 01'

athough i kinda liked it, it sounded more like your ruff character notes.

WHAT THE FUCK.IS THIS? BHENCHOD LOUDE KE BAAL YE HI KYA??BHOSDIKE

The characters are interesting and I like the general story but the flow of the story is off. It's hard to tell when you're shifting from the past to the present. I would also highly recommend changing the point of view you're writing from.