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Click here"I tried texting you to reminding you but you never replied so I assumed you had quit."
Giving me a look like I was a fucking idiot she said "I forgot to call because I was busy with family and soccer but I think I lost my phone somewhere in your house."
"Your phone?" Remembering that I had slid it under the bed when she started to cry. "Oh your phone? I think I might know where it is." Letting her in she took off her shoes to follow me to the bedroom
"Where's Kiera?" Looking around anticipating the little monster
"She's with her grandparents all night tonight. You didn't respond so I assumed you quit."
"What about Jane?" Looking like she was expecting to find her hiding around the corner
"She's busy with family tonight. With no one to watch Kiera I decided to take a night to myself and relax."
"Oh." Sounding a little happy, "so I guess I'm not needed tonight then."
"Yup," I said opening the door to the bedroom, "when we find your phone I can drive you straight home." I said kneeling to reach under the bed
"I thought I was going to work late tonight and so I told my parents I'd be home tomorrow evening." I heard some shuffling behind me, my head still under the bed arm outstretched feeling for her phone.
"Sorry for the trouble, I'll pay you for tonight then drop you off at home. Found it!" pulling out the phone from under the bed I raised my head presenting the phone only to drop it
Lena was standing in the middle of the room, her track suit was in a pile at her feet and she was naked, well not naked naked she was wearing DreamsGirls Leg Avenue fishnet halter body stockings. The front was laced up starting from the top of her groin widening to the cup of her bare breasts. The outfit was crotchless and she was wearing no panties, her bare meaty pussy was on display for me to see.
"You like it?" She asked turning to the side to show off the rest. The fishnet stockings stopped just before the start of her ass showing off that beautifully round tight bubble butt leaving the back bare. Turning back to face me squeezing her breasts together, "I think it's a little revealing."
"Maybe." I said like an idiot.
"It's the one you gave me to show off to Jack, remember? I don't think he's good enough to see me like this though."
"Um" I took a big gulp.
"Since I'm here to work but your daughter is gone, why don't I keep you company tonight? You won't even have to pay me, I babysit your daughter not you." Reaching down to play with herself. "Waddya say big boy? If I keep you company tonight will you keep me company?"
Sitting back on the bed I took off my pants taking hold of my already hard cock and started to stroke it
"It's a deal baby, now kneel."
So John puts love pee in her unprotected pussy, and she's going to have a new name-Mrs. Also, Kiera loves her new mommy, and the new baby she has in her belly that mommy and daddy made!
Ignore the haters, take the constructive advice and carry on! This was great, thoroughly enjoyed this =) when can we expect the next submission??
No you for your feedback. English is not my strongest language and this is the first time I decided to publish a story or 2. I write for myself and if you don't like it then my apologies. But thank you to those who read and liked it, I hope to do better in the future
About as cliched as it gets. I hope you made Jane a little different, or does she also have "a round firm bubble butt and perky 30C breasts?" Does Jane also wear every stereotypical "sexy" girl costume as well??
It also definitely drags; a little self induglent. It's too bad because it actually wouldn't be too bad if you had more of an imagination. I didn't think the actual Writing was that bad, but then I skipped about 80% of it.
You say you're handsome, ripped, with a huge cock & all the money in the world but you still need alchohol, drugs and a girl on the rebound seeking revenge to attract a girl? At Lena's age all you need is to be acceptable in the looks department, able to carry a conversation, and let her catch you looking at her genuinely attracted, she'll do the rest.
good story of Lena showing her ex-bf what he lost in her beautiful body and virginity, some errors in grammar but readable. Please continue with love story of Lena and John and relationship of Keira and Lena, Keira loves Lena so much and story can become very interesting.
Drags on quite a bit. It was a good story until the the night of her birthday. Basically he's getting her drunk, drugged her with a 'horny' pill... um no. The story from there reads like a cheesy 70s porno.
The spelling errors and grammar issues really do affect the story. Recommend getting it proof-read & editing help.
Keep on writing & publishing!
I agree with the prior comment. There are numerous very distracting spelling and grammar errors here. Major proofreading is in order. Story drags quite a bit.
Good story, if a bit slow-paced for my tastes, but enough spelling mistakes to be distracting: puckered out => tuckered out, masterbait => masturbate, peaked => peeked and more. Literotica has a section on finding an editor.