by Catmoore
Its story telling par excellence. A perfect blend of taut plot build up and eroticsm. I have done fair bit of reading on literotica but your story is in a different league. Some stories are crass, some crude,some a bit of a joke,some lewd,some stretch all limits of credibility. Yours had none of these sterling qualities :).
You have left on the edge of a crevice hanging by a slender thread.
another part of this awesome hot story, great reading. getting nearer to the taking of his aunt.
Do you really know where you're going with this story or where you should be going; seeing as how the 'place' where it is is titled, "Literotica"? If it's titled, "Literotica", then get the lead out & make the the damn thing EROTIC instead of all this pussyfooting around!
You're just playing with us and making us wait......
"Do you really know where you're going with this story or where you should be going; seeing as how the 'place' where it is is titled, "Literotica"? If it's titled, "Literotica", then get the lead out & make the the damn thing EROTIC instead of all this pussyfooting around!"
I disagree absolutely with the above. Literotica is full of slam/bam rubbish. Catmoore knows that the most erotic part of the body is in the brain. Please continue to tantalise, tease, arouse and intrigue us with that complex mixture of lust, self doubt, desire and fear of rejection if we show our hand to soon that is within all thinking sensitive people.
This is the first of your stories I've read. I love the sexual tension you develop by going back and forth between the characters Definitely 5star. Look forward to reading more.
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