All Comments on 'Dinner Delight'

by fierypixie1987

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FASfanFASfanover 7 years ago
A competent and enjoyable story, fierypixie1987

You write well -- it is a pleasure to read your work. Please bring us more of it! Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice Story

Looking forward to reading the next chapter in your story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
A problem of my own

I don't like being left on a cliff hanger. I wouldn't have started reading it if I knew it wasn't going to come to a conclusion. I also suggest taking the "omg's" off the first page.

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