All Comments on 'Dirty Little Secret'

This story is as classy as it is erotic! I like how the excitement builds gradually into total satisfaction for both the man and the woman. I also like what's left out: disgusting acts of coprophilia by men that I've read in other stories about anal sex and women who pull the man's come out of their assholes and swallow it. Thanks for portraying anal sex in a clean, exciting, and satisfying way.

Nice premise.

But lacking in details.

When they're in the car, and she's playing with her pussy, neede dialog. Could be him asking her how it felt. Was she getting close to cumming? Giving her directions as to what she should do. Concentrate on lips? Clit? Go faster? Slower? Don't cum yet?

Three stars.