All Comments on 'Dirty Sir!'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
What?

This was incredibly fast paced, and the dialogue was horrendous

NeoBratNeoBratalmost 7 years ago
Started out great

You had a wonderful start to the story and then you rushed to get to the end. I was hooked and then totally lost interest. You could have done so much more with this.

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakover 6 years ago
What a let down!

It started out pretty well but then it went downhill. It was too rushed and left much to be desired.

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