All Comments on 'Disclosures: Selfie Involvement Ch. 01'

Totally unbelievable. Title should be "Crazy whore throws life away". Sound like menopause or midlife crisis thinking.

I like the concept, and you executed it very well. I'm interested to see where this story goes from here.

One minor quibble: the second word in this story should be "descent."

Keep writing. Screw the critics.

Uh, by making a comment, YOU became a critic. So, by your "logic" you were saying to screw your comments.

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I just love assholes who can't stand it when others dare to have a different opinion, that only their's matters.

The characters behave without rhyme or reason and are so stupid that their combined IQ is less than that of a pea. When you make your characters idiots, your story becomes idiotic. What a complete waste of time. No stars.

The title to this story should have been: "Two whores meet each other", or "two whores cheat their husbands". Where are the moral of these two women? I would agree with their life if they divorced and then live their wife as Internet whores!!!

should have written: " live their lives as Internet whores!!!

Wife goes from timid to selfies to porn way to quickly for me. Slow it down, add some hesitation and uncertainty to make this better.

She goes from needing to open up to total betrayer in five paragraphs. Did the first Chelsea die? Are money and sex all she cares about. Her husband will be devastated and she simply won't care.... Characters are and plot progression are totally unbelievable. On a lighter note perhaps she'll meet up with a triple axe murderer and be hacked to death on camera. Eric would certainly be better off.

It's good that this stuff isn't autobiographical.

If you'd be interested, I would prefer to discuss them with Dolly first, I'm sure you wouldn't mind......

Is this you or just what is in your head rattling around.

Cheating skank ooze with some kind d of teist. Ok so far

I would like to be the main female characters and be videoed having sex (gangbanged) by several co-workers of my husband. Or a group of his friends and our neighbors.

This author writes her ir garbage about white whores and cheap black dildo.