by pinkrogue
An excellent chapter. well written and nicely paced. I must read the whole novel (?) from the beginning. 5 stars
Nicely done. It would be fun if they have a 'tarts and vicars' party or some such.
This is truly well written. I hope there are many more further installments!
Wow, fantastic finish, if that doesn't leave your readers hard or wet, you have an audience of the deceased :)
Written so well I suspect an element of truth from your own awakening
Thank you for a great read, now where did my day go :)