All Comments on 'Displayed in Chains Pt. 01'

Should be displayed in chains for posting another one star story

If she was born on the 29th of February she would only have a birthday that was actually on the 29th every 4 years, so 4, 8, 12, 16, 20, 24...

The minute you put her in chains, then LW becomes the wrong category. Badly done.

1 star

then you might get more positive comments and scores, as it is at present, even the title is a big turnoff here in LW.

pure shit.

@burlysmith - You took the words right out of my mouth!

As long as we're nitpicking, salad, steak and potatoes isn't a three-course meal!

As much as I hate category wars, the chains definitely make this BDSM, and there's none of the cheating that we've come to expect from LW.

Not all LW stories have to be free of BDSM elements, BUT it's the lack of distinctively LW tropes (unfaithful spouse) that make it wrong for the category.

Wrong section. Next time...consider proofreading and grammar check.

Beyond terrible, venturing into insulting the reader.