All Comments on 'Divine'

One bad relationship doesn't mean the end of the world. Continue with this story.

Looking forward to see how this is resolved.

I just submitted the new chapter to my editor to look at and review so it should be up in a couple days

She tars all men with the same brush because her ex treated her that way? She needs to grow up, I'm wondering why the hell I read this chapter to the end.

If you were to continue reading, the next chapter explains why she is the way she is. dont judge the story to quickly

This reminds me of a high school essay in quality. Desperately need to be edited and re-written. While very amateur in style, it is not bad. The plot line shows promise of developing well.

yeah the first chapter needs to be wriiten over....i had took it from first person to third and there were a few mistakes left behind but it is my first story and im enjoying it and getting better. i do hope that you continue to read as the story progresses