All Comments on 'Diving with Jessica Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Out Standing!!!

This new chapter was outstanding!!! Again you write some of the best if not the best Alba stories!!! Knowing what we do about Jessica, the thought of her wanting to be dominated during sex is wild!!! Please, continue to write about Jessica and her alter ego "Max".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Wow what a fantastic follow up!!

Keep up the good work on the Jessica Alba stories!!

Mojo648Mojo648almost 6 years ago
Review.

Anything like a good story line covering Jess is a good one, not just sex, fun and laughter is needed .

Mojo648Mojo648over 4 years ago
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Honestly I loved the story....... up till the rough treatment of jess by Chris, I would've left that out, plus what was the bad news 4 jess when jade wouldnt let him in? Did I miss something?

Other wise it would've been 5 outta 5 stars, ( 7 outa 7 if I couldve),

Keep writing more please.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Couldn't count ALL the mistakes on the first Page!!!

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