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Anonymousover 8 years agogood to see you write again
What a great start, I hope to read more. Definitely a 4.0
Anonymousover 8 years agoUnoriginal
Too similar to many other stories of this type. If you could think of some sort of different approach it would improve your story.
C_frommnover 8 years agoWhy Stop
He has the Black Nurse to go see and go see his ex Boss to get his jib back and get a Raise. Not to mention setting up a Harem. he is Young,Dumb and Full of Cum. with No Responsibilities.
Darnusesover 8 years agoPretty darn good
Definitely needed some more development story-wise, but overall a pretty good start =)
Anonymousover 8 years ago"Tori, you find me the most attractive man on earth."
It was at this line that I rolled my eyes and stop reading.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoNice to read a story who is not entirely focused on his own dick, and loves pleasing a pussy.
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