All Comments on 'Doesn't Take Long'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

An excellent story, having that rare quality of innovation.

Masterskitten26. Yes it was an error, but I don't think it detracted from the story. We all make mistakes, including some who typo’d ‘stars’.

Masterskitten26Masterskitten26over 7 years ago
Bad case of Writer Forgetfulness

"She waited, but not patiently. Her hand reached down under her skirt to feel her shaven pussy. She wasn't wearing underwear. "

" Before she knew it, Vanessa's pants and panties had been pulled off and the broad-shouldered man was rubbing his cock against her crotch from behind."

She went from wearing a skirt with no panties and in only minutes she had on pants and panties.

Sorry, no starts from me.

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