All Comments on 'Dom Roomies Ch. 02'

so great you continue the story ! thanks Onyourknees , it's really a very good one for the ones that like this genre.

appreciate it!

Hope you don't pussy out with the turnabout play. Those bitches deserve some serious payback...

i raced through the first 2 chapters and i cant wait for the next one

excellent story so far

PLEASE FINISH THIS.

In chapter one Jake agrees to serve these four chics. The girls' leverage is his debit card. Jake was to work daily and his money was to go into that account. Assuming he made money, the bank account would increase and the leverage the girls had to keep him would increase. But Jake never ever went to work. Since there was no money in his account they really had no leverage and at times you made mention that he couldn't leave. Of course he could.

I liked, however, the effort you put into the story. It was nonstop action. However, please, please spell check your writing. You move from present to past tense. You misspell hundreds of words. You leave out words. Yes I got the gist of the story but it would have been nicer to have a cleaner document submitted.

Many erotic writings are either unfinished, or just get tedious. This story has, for me, it's tedious side, namely the confusing recurrence of anal penetration. It is a story about slavery and is set in a scheme which could be credible: eg he volunteers and puts himself into a situation from which there is no escape, and in which there are very few limits yo the depths of compulsion to which he will be subjected. There scheme has good imaginative elements, such as the vulnerability of his bank account, the tension between having to appear normal at work and the abject slavery of his life as a captive. He has to reflect on his predicament - in writing! All these elements however disappear in the story, a major failing of the plot. A little different are the drastic moments of loss:being forbidden to speak, and then to walk, are brilliant, second only yo permanant enforced chastity. But they are not followed up as well as they might be, these rules in which the essence of his radical slavery lies. Nonetheless he is absorbed by the requirement of absolute obedience. Despite the incredibility of some things he endures, the story has nonetheless a huge power as it plumbs the depths of a total loss of freedom and the practice of total obedience. And that is really arousing!

I loved Dom Roomies 1 & 2 ..... 3 not so much, hope you write some more!!!!

Nice! I would for 4 women to dominate me like this! I would enjoy being naked all the time around them while they had their way with me. I would especially love it when they attached nipple clamps to my delicate man-nipples, attached a nipple chain to the nipple clamps, attached heavy nipple weights to the nipple chain, and mercilessly tortured my nipples!

"Carly had me put chains on my nipple clamps so she could tug on them while she relaxed...." --I would love that so much!

I wish I could live a life like this in total obedience to a group of women.

Nieprawdopodobna. Autor nie ma pojęcia o dominacji i uległości. Opowieść jak z obozu śmierci. Brak tylko wyrywanych paznokci i wyłupiania oczu. Najważniejsze : człowiek nie podporządkuje się osobie o niższym IQ . Dominacja to nie upodlenie . Niewola a oddanie się komuś to dwie różne rzeczy. Człowieka można złamać i zabić ,jednak na "psią" miłość i wierność należy zasłużyć . Do tego trzeba : zaufania i miłości graniczącej z podziwem. Bezwolne wykonywanie poleceń to faszyzm.