- BDSM
- Dom Roomies Ch. 02
- Page 14
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On my 2nd last day, first thing in the morning, it was really early when Deb got me out of my cage, and we went straight to the living room for an announcement. The girls all looked pretty sleepy and were slumped over, except Kim.
"It's your second to last day, of course. There are a few things we want to go over. Your time will end tomorrow at midnight, when the month officially changes to September. At that point, you are free to go, we'll even have your belongings prepared, you can get dressed, shower, whatever, and when you are ready, you can go, hell I'll even give you a drive."
"We do owe you a reward, for ratting out Alice, however, we've decided that since you have been an excellent slave, and really have made this an incredible summer, so out of gratitude and curiosity, we're decided to make as big a reward as we can.
"Your slave period of slavery at midnight tonight, and the 24 hours after that, we've decided we want to do your bidding. So, you're in charge, and can get your revenge, or as much as possible, in the last 24 hours."
"Now, of course, you won't have the same essential carte blanch as we have had. We certainly won't let you beat us like we did you, for example, or shove your fist inside of us, put a tongue in your disgusting asshole, but we'll be game for a lot, I think it's somewhat hypocritical to put you through 4 months of it, and not even try a day. So, come midnight, you're free, but right until then, your ass is ours."
"We're going to go get a few more hours of sleep. One little advantage we gave ourselves was to only give you a couple hours of sleep, to hopefully get you tired out so you'll need some down time for those 24 hours. So, it's 5 am now, you went to bed at like 2. And you won't be sleeping anymore today."
"You have 5 hours, till 10 am, to put together a feast and I know the house is always clean, but spend the rest of the time really scrubbing the hardwood floors and the bathroom so they are pristine, then cook. That way after 10 we'll have nothing to do but enjoy the last day we have control. Wake one of us at 10 if we aren't up. OK?"
I nodded. They left and I got to work. Two more days, and the second one, I started to plan out in my head.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoNieprawdopodobna. Autor nie ma pojęcia o dominacji i uległości. Opowieść jak z obozu śmierci. Brak tylko wyrywanych paznokci i wyłupiania oczu. Najważniejsze : człowiek nie podporządkuje się osobie o niższym IQ . Dominacja to nie upodlenie . Niewola a oddanie się komuś to dwie różne rzeczy. Człowieka można złamać i zabić ,jednak na "psią" miłość i wierność należy zasłużyć . Do tego trzeba : zaufania i miłości graniczącej z podziwem. Bezwolne wykonywanie poleceń to faszyzm.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoI wish I could live a life like this in total obedience to a group of women.
Anonymousover 3 years agoNice! I would for 4 women to dominate me like this! I would enjoy being naked all the time around them while they had their way with me. I would especially love it when they attached nipple clamps to my delicate man-nipples, attached a nipple chain to the nipple clamps, attached heavy nipple weights to the nipple chain, and mercilessly tortured my nipples!
"Carly had me put chains on my nipple clamps so she could tug on them while she relaxed...." --I would love that so much!
Anonymousover 5 years agoI loved Dom Roomies 1 & 2 ..... 3 not so much, hope you write some more!!!!
Anonymousabout 8 years agoMany erotic writings are either unfinished, or just get tedious. This story has, for me, it's tedious side, namely the confusing recurrence of anal penetration. It is a story about slavery and is set in a scheme which could be credible: eg he volunteers and puts himself into a situation from which there is no escape, and in which there are very few limits yo the depths of compulsion to which he will be subjected. There scheme has good imaginative elements, such as the vulnerability of his bank account, the tension between having to appear normal at work and the abject slavery of his life as a captive. He has to reflect on his predicament - in writing! All these elements however disappear in the story, a major failing of the plot. A little different are the drastic moments of loss:being forbidden to speak, and then to walk, are brilliant, second only yo permanant enforced chastity. But they are not followed up as well as they might be, these rules in which the essence of his radical slavery lies. Nonetheless he is absorbed by the requirement of absolute obedience. Despite the incredibility of some things he endures, the story has nonetheless a huge power as it plumbs the depths of a total loss of freedom and the practice of total obedience. And that is really arousing!
