All Comments on 'Dominating Miss Davenshaw'

how is this Femdom??

This story shows some promise but needs an angle. Also, the writer should take his time in developing his themes.

This is a good start, can't wait to read more.

You may increase some changes. Maybe her wardrobe... And attitude...

Keep going! We wait some more soon!

Make her lose her confidence... Turn her from a bitchy arrogante leader into a meekly bimbo unable to say no to the men... Make her lose the control and breakdown her self esteem... Embarrass her out of the limits of her dignity, for amusement of all her subordinates!

And, please, don't take to long...

Why do you label a 'break the bitch' story with femdom?

Remove the Femdom Tag as quickly as possible. It's not a Femdom story.

not much of a plot