All Comments on 'Dominatrix Makes Him a Slut Ch. 01'

I don’t know if you have ever seen a professional mistress. I have seen many mistresses and they all have their own style. You do say about the pre-session discussion which is correct but then you refer to him thinking he’s been ripped off and did she actually disappear for half an hour? I found the writing a bit staccato but if English isn’t your first language I’m sure that’ll improve as your writing progresses. Writers make mistakes, particularly new ones, and don’t be disheartened if you get some of the thoughtless anonymous criticisms.

This is similar to my first visit with my mistress. She too dressed me all sexy and feminine then fucked me deep and hard. I can't wait to read the next chapters. this 1st chapter was fantastic.