All Comments on 'Donna Plays A Party Game Pt. 01'

Love your stories, especially Donna, this is great!

One of the best scenarios I've read

I am so looking forward to see where the story goes this time.

Great work , keep it up!

I was a big fan of the Donna camping series and looking forward to seeing these new adventures. I hope Joe doesnt get conpletely left out of the action, theres lots of girls to go around!

So good to see you back again with another camping story and now this, you are the best on this by a mile so please ignore the clowns who have nothing better to do then give out.

I used to really like Donna from the other stories but don't like how she comes off in this one. She really seems like a manipulative bitch, guilt's Joe into agreeing she can play, then crying and guilting him into dropping out, meanwhile purposely choosing Ross to make out with fully aware with how much Joe hates him.

I really don't get the impression she cares at all about Joe, she's just looking for Ross's dick again.

Maybe I'll cheer for Ross in this story. You may as well have Donna break up with Joe so she can be with him. That's what it looks like she wants anyway. Then maybe Joe can be with someone who actually likes him, Angie sounds good.

I'll give you 4*. I think it's going to be a hot story, but not really liking Donna anymore and that's too bad.

Great to have Donna back. Keep up the good work and ignore the haters! If they don't like it they don't have to read it. You have a lot of fans.

glad you're back and writing about Donna. shes one of my all time favorites. Chapter 1 is a really good setup, and I hate to criticize you but so far its feeling too obvious. Like one of the other commenters said, Donna and Ross? Really? I'll wait until the next chapter to pass judgement but I hope its more than Joe not doing anything while Donna fucks around. as fun as that is, we already had 7 chapters of that.

Welcome back Donna, and all the usual suspects.

One piece of work (much time, effort behind it) can never please all. I'll continue to enjoy it for what it is.

Thank you.

Write the story the way you want to write it. That's what makes your stories great.

Other people need to relax, it's only chapter 1.

I absolutely love your setup and the Donna character. I really hope you are not discouraged by any of the negative feedback. We loved the first story BECAUSE of what you wrote about. The cuckold elements are hot. Please, don't take too long to write more.

So glad you are writing for Donna again. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next installment.

did I mention that I'm in love with Donna?

So happy to have another Donna series to read. Can't wait for the next chapter!

So very excited! Donnas back, and shes bringing her sister with her! Should be excellent, and I like the rivalry with the other girl too.

Don't keep us waiting. Please continue this story.

So excited to see a new Donna series... Hopefully the next chapter comes soon!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

I am so glad to see another Donna series and it is great to see Ross again too. I can't wait.

Really can't wait till the next part!

Please continue

Love the story but wish you change the characters names. Also let Joe get some. I would love to see him hook up with the sister. But more please

Please put up the next edition. I love Donna and cannot wait to see what nasty things see gets up to

Give it up guys, she is not coming back. We all ran ret123 off. His feelings got hurt? Can't take any criticism apparently. Ever notice how his characters demean women? Yet he can write one dimensional sexy stories. It's been more than 2 months since chapter 1. He must be in his own cave pouting. Anymore stories are the SAME. I like reading them. I dont pretend they will be anything new. More showings, more cuckold, more one boy calling her names. Sooo, anyway give it up readers. Ret 123 went south/north/east/west? Just went away. Live long &prosper Donna, it was nice knowing you......

from then on the Hand may be your only release, TK U MLJ LV NV

The more of Ross the better imo. I was scared you weren't going to bring him back. I know you're probably used to getting dumb comments from people the story clearly isn't meant for but yeah, don't let them bother you. I hope you continue for as long as you want.

More of Donna please

Come on , do not leave us hanging like that, continue please, can't wait any longer,

Youare really such a talented writer,

Big fan.

these are awesome stories . . .DONNA is incredible and mind-blowing . . . .these are the best stories on the forum . .. . i sincerely hope there are more of these stories to come ret123 . . . . question: can u PLEASE write a full story on the CONCERT incident that DONNA instigated with her juicy tits???

Please continue the story can't get enough of Donna.

just like the United State's choice for president points to, we as a society enjoy stories that demean women. Get over it. There are several comments that plead for a return from Donna. Ret123 can write about whatever they want and anyone that doesn't like it... oh well deal with it. It takes a special kind of fascist to tell someone what to write on an adult fiction website.

Donna is one of the best characters on all of Literotica. Please continue to give her demeaning, humiliating adventures.

Both the camping and the party... come on!!

Just wanted to say that I love your Donna stories. "Groped at the Company Party" is definitely my favorite, with the combination of her being groped, sucking the boss's cock and her subsequent humiliation, the blackmail and the filming, but I am also eagerly awaiting to see where this one goes!

Part 2 please!

Looks like we're out of luck for part 2...

Aren't there anyway you 'd continue this story :(

Hope to see you back

Really enjoyed it. I hope in part 2 Angie can get some attention back, maybe she's the first (maybe only one) to take her panties off instead of sucking off ross on a 3rd Base hit? I wonder if any of the girls would rather receive oral than give it in front of so many people. And it sounds like Sylvia needs to be fucked, probably by the black guy!

This was great but hopefully part 2 will come sometime

I wish there was a way to commission you and other writers. I'm sure there are plenty of us willing to throw money at you in order to get you to continue your stories.

Bring on the next chapter, this is awesome !!!

More Donna !!!

I hope you write another chapter! Want to see how the party ends.....

MORE, part 2 pleaseeee

Now that you're writing again, which is great, this story definitely needs a follow-up!

Seems you are back to literotica, will you get back to Donna story ?

I see that one of my fave authors is back writing here again... so, perhaps you've got more chapters to this story to come??

Will part 2 of Donna plays a party game ever be on here your Donna story's are great and hope to see lots more but I really want part 2 to come

I have checked your profile every day to see if a new Donna story is posted since 2016.

Wow, the narrator is the world's biggest schmuck.

This is great, keep it up

Enjoyed all your work. Hopefully something will inspire you to write again