All Comments on 'Donna's First Time'

Great story and your a very lucky man. What a great wife to have and be so free as to enjoy so much sex. I'll bet Donna will love the gang bang among friends. She must really get turned on and you also. Good luck and have all the fun you can. Just don't break up a good thing with jealousy. You will be able to talk about your perverted adventures later in life and enjoy the fact that you both enjoyed life to the fullest.

Was distracting to have the first person changing all the time in the story, or to have the new guy suddenly become a friend he had knwn for years. Need to proof the story better.

I liked your story--I can only imagine hot exciting it was--been trying to broach this subject with my wife for years!

Who is Tony? Hmmm Probably some guy that the writer wants to have sex with. Some other guy that the writer wants to suck his cock. He lets his wife do all the things he wishes to do while he just watches. He would be a lot better if he has the husband just go down on the guy's cock. Perhaps he and his wife could find a new pastime...sucking other guys off together. Could be fun

Not a bad effort. In the future, proof read a little more carefully. Most of the time the first or second draft is not ready to upload - read, reread then reread. Also, the story you're really wanting to write, and we're really wanting to read, is the one where little mister horner is made to sit in the corner and watch the mrs. get it slammed to her over and over. Share with us how you feel as you glance over at the hubby from time to time. Is he in shock watching this youngster give it to you so hard? After all, he is the paper boy. He doesn't have much style, but he sure is energetic. Isn't is amazing that his cock just stays hard! And by all means, make sure that little mister horner cleans up so that you can get a good night's sleep. Marc

great story very erotic you are gorgeous by the way i almost came just looking at ur pic and i hadnt even started ur story..keep it up gorgeous

You are a great writer man. Donna reminds me of my first wife Anne.

Absolute crap ,no decent story or plot. Just stupid self-serving smut!! Pathetic!!

more JPB stuff why people like this would get married is a question. Maybe people like this see marridge as a business partnership as they don't see it as a commitment of any other type.

Nothing like a good threesome when you can find a polite stud with the equipment to deliver satisfaction.

I hope you don't have a mirror and use it. Then you'd see a total loser.

Very believable, very erotic . Thanks for sharing.

Thanks for your writing.

Great story I have dreamed for years of my wife fucking another man forva long time ,2weeks ago we were at a resort in Mexico that is nude we met a couple there and my wife became very comfortable with them the man approached me to see if we were swingers and I told him about my fantasy and he was very hot wanting my wife so one night at the end of the night I asked them to our room we approached my wife and she was ok with just playing around so me and my wife and the other guy got on the bed naked and started fooling around with my wife between us we both were on her all over she got so turned on she made my fantasy COME TRUE it was so hot watching her fuck another man. It was great