All Comments on 'Donovan's Rewarding Revenge Ch. 04'

I would have thought, from the first coupla pages that the revenge should be Brandons. He seems to be the one who was fucked out of everything.

Posting a page at a time should take about a year to finish THIS story.

shaping up to be a magnum opus ifya got the talent and patience writing a long piece that is this good isn't easy good luck

this is a good story I have enjoyed it. But it is not moving along very fast and at this rate I hope readers don't tire of it before we see the end. I am still routing for the husband hoping he will get his act together and do alittle revenge of his own.

I like this story... it has a lot to consider, but where does Paula become naked and where's Paula's pussy?

only wish you would finish it.

your hole story is one dumb scum bag story and you eat shit for writeing it made no séance .

Poor Brandon, well and truly screwed. Where is his revenge?