by SpotInTheSand
If you ended this story right now...I'd be happy! Held my breathe and enjoyed it so, now what...on with the roller coaster?
This is basically a multiple stroke story which could get boring, but so far the tension from the underlying plot holds it together. I wish that Julie had a more exciting personality, though the indication that she thought Brandi hot certainly might be an expansion point....
3*
Tim is a shit. He knew when he was hurting Julia and did it anyway. I don't trust him to not hurt Julia again. I am disappointed that she took him back. And the sex is still tiresome. I feel no love, just performance.
..."I've always been a good guy. I've treated people with respect, I've always genuinely cared about others more than myself. That was just the way I was raised. I figured there was no way karma would let me get screwed over this way."
Seriously? the guy is delusional about his own self assumed martyr status.
what a clown. Is this how he really sees his treatment of her? really?
The dude is an asshat. But, a very nice change of behavior in this chapter.
Still not a fan of Tim the Tool, but it nice to see Jules finally get treated as she deserves for a change. Well done.