All Comments on 'Don't Ever Give Up Ch. 05'

Bit better ... still not to the standard I hold you.

..."I've always been a good guy. I've treated people with respect, I've always genuinely cared about others more than myself. That was just the way I was raised. I figured there was no way karma would let me get screwed over this way."

Seriously? the guy is delusional about his own self assumed martyr status.

what a clown. Is this how he really sees his treatment of her? really?

The dude is an asshat. But, a very nice change of behavior in this chapter.

Still not a fan of Tim the Tool, but it nice to see Jules finally get treated as she deserves for a change. Well done.

The "and she's still here" gave me chills. That was powerful. Great writing

3*

Tim is a shit. He knew when he was hurting Julia and did it anyway. I don't trust him to not hurt Julia again. I am disappointed that she took him back. And the sex is still tiresome. I feel no love, just performance.

This is basically a multiple stroke story which could get boring, but so far the tension from the underlying plot holds it together. I wish that Julie had a more exciting personality, though the indication that she thought Brandi hot certainly might be an expansion point....

If you ended this story right now...I'd be happy! Held my breathe and enjoyed it so, now what...on with the roller coaster?