by pregnantex
Thank you for this next chapter. Loving the pace and the excitement. Can't wait til mom gets home!!
Thank you!!
While I do find the refrain of nonsense words and phrases like "poop hole" and "core biology" silly and annoying, the storytelling is excellent. I hope this one continues. It would be fun to see Beth's fantasies about Sarah explored.
You have a wonderful imagination, somewhat perverted to be sure, but then It pushes a lot of my buttons, including some I didn't know I had, so I can't complain.
Across your stories Beth is the great character, so I've always regretted you didn't write up what happened when/if she honored her promise of bunny play that night. You haven't published here for a while so I have a feeling I'll never know, but if you ever think about a comeback that would be a great place to start.
Please let us know -- did Beth really know what was going on? or did she truly fantasize and make-believe the father/daughter sex? I can't 100% tell from your story but I think Beth knew.
Am I right?
Maybe another good author will finish this and make it 'hole'. ;) Great story and writing, Pregnantex. Now to check your other stories. Thanks for this one.