All Comments on 'Double Exposure'

Welcome back with another great tale. Your excellent work has been missed and this is another awesome story with good length. Thanks for the early Christmas treat, please keep writing.

is his new partner in crime. Team up on all his more sexy shoots, when his confidence lags she whispers something naughty in his ear. The threesomes these two could make happen!

wow great story. loved the build up and playful teasing. cant wait to see what you come up with next. hopefully sequal

I knew I was hooked from the first page. Your sense how to express the most intimate of moments is just fabulous. Ass is the new Vag! It was so great how you pulled that back in at the end.

I echo what others have said in looking forward to future installments.

Exxxcellentease. Got my hand down there. I was so hard.

I love long stories like this that build up to a hot finale. 5+*s!!

One of the best I've read in a Long time. I hope you will write more - sequel or other.

Very sensual and erotic, one of my new favorites here. Definitely worth at least a 7!

Great story. Very likable and believable characters. For how slowly and carefully the characters played things in the first 3/4 of the story, having the three of them have sex with Dad in the house seemed like a radical shift in tone and character.

I would love to read a sequel, if it could have the same level of tension and drama, and isn't just about cataloging the various mathematical possibilities for positions and couplings a family of four can cum together in.

story. It had a excellent build up before the sex and you could picture being there. I would love to see a continuation. Not sure I would want to include dad as he seems like he is on the way out of the marriage. A lot of ways to go with this and look forward to seeing more.

A new classic in taboo erotica. Loved the slow buildup, and just enough reticence to build up the tension to an unbearable level before it broke loose. Simply awesome. Bravo.

Definitely one of the best stories on this site. If you don't do a sequel, please at least do more like it.

For a wonderfully written and original story. It is so erotic and I hated to see it end. Five stars seems like far too few. I can't wait for your next submissions.

The way you structured this story was nice. Keep it up

I really hope that you choose to continue the story of this twisted tryst!

who can't distinguish between past tense (she did)

or past conditional (she would have).

Make up your daft mind laddie.

The change of tense ruined what might have otherwise have been a good story for me.

If you sort that and a few other daft glitches out, you could be a good writer.

I would have rated it 6 stars if I could! Yes, there are a few grammatical hickups but they didn't bother me that much. However, having it or future stories edited/corrected would be a good idea. That said, it was incredibly arousing and i think i speak for all your readers when i say we need (a) sequel(s) :-)

Not entirely original, I have read something similar on Literotica. It was a very intense story though. And ofcourse I have to mention that I read these stories to get off. Not to correct grammar and spelling. It seems as though some of the visitors to this site need to get themselves an English major of some sort and go grade papers somewhere if that's what they need to have an orgasm.

Glad to see some new things from you. Would enjoy follow ups from this and other stories--like the family at the lake. Better proof reading which is my only problem with earlier stories.

Dont you just love it when you climax at the same time with the main character.. holy shit I need to clean up.

nice story, would like to read the next chapter, and to hear about the father, and see if he was included in the picture(s)

... ohhhhh I love this story, its characters and its progress ... please continue ...

sorry for my bad english

Long story as you said but well worth the read was as sexy as hell and well written i thought

Good characters and balance between the three (Dad we haven't really even met), nice use of the photo shoots to push the tension and then the sex. You told us he was more powerful behind the camera early in the story .... and then showed him powerful behind it in a way that drove the plot in the great final scene. Well done.

Awesome story. Well developed. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue with another chapter ;)

The very best I have read in thirty years. Please add to the story with a follow up. Thanks

Sadly this is the first story this guy has written in 4 years so it might be a while before we see another one..but i'm sure it'll be worth the wait.

Fantastic story this is how these should all be written!!!

great story one of the best iv'e read on here in quite a while hope you continue this story would like to see where it goes from here

Could not stop reading until the end. Very well crafted.

You are one of the few authors who understands the forbidden allure of incest fantasy. The initial reluctance, the dirty incest talk and nasty addiction that prevents them from stopping. This is incest.

Well !! I was quote upset when I didn't check to see how long this story was,, but I was already hooked so I couldn't stop until I got to the end. But hay, I didn't need to sleep tonight anyway... Just hope my hubby isn't so asleep that I can't wake him. Lets just see how sleepy he is ??? Oh wow,, that always works !! Good night folks, got to take care of some important business now.... Thanks for the story and will be looking for another from Scribbleskillz......

The best I've read on the site. Look forward to more.

Awesome story! Nice work and thanks!

WOW!!!!!

This was one of the best stories I've ever read online, more would be great

Very well written story best I have read on this site so far.

Really well done and would love to know what the dads deal was.

Loved the story, but I especially loved the ending! that was rich!

I just wish it had stayed as a romantic love story instead of going to such extremes.

you are awesome. best suspense build up i have ever seen. Now, when is part 2 coming out. 10 pages is not enough. lol.

Would love to see a continuation of this story.

Failing that, use Jason and Kelly together without Mom.

Maybe they could both go back to the sushi restaurant, and Jason could ask that waitress to do a photo shoot, with Kelly 'assisting' of course.

That ending was hilarious. Me and my mom thought it was great...

Best plot build up ever ! I truly enjoyed it, thank you.

Very well written. Good story line and buildup. Good descriptions and lots of teasing before the events. You could do worse than do a continuation.

Absolutely the max; great story and a skilled writer as well. Two thumbs up...Way up!

Pretty hot, though the last sentence where his mom asked him to leave the last picture doesn't make much sense, though funny, shocking hos father with the rampant incest that has been going on seem awfully risky, and that someone has been fucking both his wife and daughter, maybe he wouldn't mind, but the thought of the dad joining them is a bit of a turnoff. I realise that it was probably intended as a joke, but it's a weird place to end it.

Also it seems like the author completely forgot about what earlier seemed a significant plot element, the fact that the parents' marriage is in trouble, something that was kinda left on wayside. The son should have been more curious about that, also, Kelly was convinced that it was her father's fault, or at least only her mom deserved any sympathy, but neither seemed to actually investigate or so much as ask about what problems their parents might have..

Nailed it! Everything a Photo shoot story should be. One of the best stories I have read.

It has been a very long time since I've came across a quality story like yours that involved a threesome between the mom, son, and daughter. A story where the brother and sister make a plan to seduce and fuck their mom. I really miss that. This was a hot story and I can't wait to see what others you might have.

Great story. I hope there's a follow-up that brings the sister into a more active role. It would also be nice to repair the relationship between the dad and mom - and perhaps involve the rest of the family in interesting ways.

Loved Loved Loved it! Please continue the story I know it's been about two years but this story is too good not to continue but please have the line about keeping the photo on the camera be a passive aggressive joke against her husband for neglecting her and not a serious request.

Please continue with a new spark and repair from dad. And whole family.

You had a great story going and then you totally screwed it up when you had the sister ask her brother to butt fuck her. Don't understand why anyone would screw up a good story with something like this. I won't be wasting any more of my time reading any more of your stories. Good bye.

The old guy

Great story little longer than I normally like but it grab me. And the ending very hot but damn. Ready for more chapters

I loved your story from the beginning to the end . The husband neglecting his wife is not unique . Sometimes it's a health issue or he gets so involved with work that wife and family use fade into the horizon , and sometimes he's just a ass . I would like to see a chapter where Jason permanently takes care of both Mother and Sisters sexual needs .

I'd love to see more chapters to this story as well, but I'm wondering if this person has retired from writing for Literotica. It's been over 2 years since his last new story. To be fair, I'm not a writer, but I know that writing a story, especially a good one can take a long time, and I'm sure he has plenty of other things in his life to deal with, so I certainly don't want him to feel pressured.

It's been almost three years since I first read this story and it still gets me off. Too bad you haven't written on the site in a couple of years. I'd love to see what happened when the dad got back from China.

but

I'll never understand why an otherwise we'll written sexual saga will take 9 pages to tease and take tentative tiny steps approaching but not crossing the ultimate taboo line, but in 1 page breach the moat with a v itaulting pole u

FUCK! that ending was hot!!! Well done

THAT was HOT !

Sizzling in fact, just wonderful !

Rapier

If Ecstasy is great happiness and or Joyful excitement and fulfillment Then this almost says enough about how I enjoyed this story. This was the equivalent of 12 hours playing with a blindfolded woman with feathers, vibrators and toys until at last the game was over and it was Hide and Seek with the salami. When Kelly wanted to deal a hand in the game it spiked again. Great story, Loved it. When do you think they can increase the number of stars available???

PS: def got skillz and big brass ones. Cheers

Great story. Wonderful buildup. I think a second chapter/part involving Daddy would be great. And is needed

"God she tasted good: Somewhere between a warm peach on a summer day and that saltiness of skin after a dip in the ocean."

...there would be a sequel. This story deserves one!

Had this one in my queue for quite a while, and I'm glad I finally got around to it! It'd be super cool to see some of your writing again!

From beginning to end wonderfully erotic

This is the best story i've ever read in here. I've been wanting to write a story about events in my past. This is a true inspiration. My cock was throbbing with anticipation from start to finish.

What a long fucking great story. Loved it.

I'd love more of this story and I hope he gets both women pregnant. Maybe the next day the mum will tell her kids about their dad and his barely legal pregnant secretary. And they decide to drug them and break them. So after the dad gets back they invite his secretary over for dinner and feed them both a powerful afrodesiac while they give the dad something to knock him out for a little while. When he comes to he is tied naked to a chair with his daughter balls deep on his cock while his wife and son use and abuse his girlfriend eventually making her the son's fucktoy and breeding slave.

You should write a continuing story with the same characters. Add a little of the dad!

Just perfect what a wonderful story everything I wish I could have wrote myself

First one of yours I've read, and I got to say, I've read hundreds of incest stories one here, and this is easily in the top 5 hottest stories I've read. It has definitely sparked my imagination, and it will bode well for my future stories. I will give you credit when the time comes because you deserve it. I truly believe you are great at this and I look forward to reading more of your work. THANK YOU.

Love the way you write.

A superb story all the comments are correct hot hot very hot

Thank you so much

very erotic story. unbelievably hot and sexy. i wish you were still writing and posting to this site. your work is excellent.

Your story was great and exciting all the way to the ending.You have to write a sequel were he takes his mother anally and some of other things his sister described doing between the three of them.

Beautiful build up, unbelievably real, I think it is easily one of the top three stories here, if not THE top story.

Whilst I would love for it to get a sequel I would counsel against it. I fear it would only detract from the powerful emotions of mother and children in this story.

I pass on the gay stories.

Woow. Lovely story. Need more

for the heads up. I'll pass....

3rd time I've read this story...once just after it was first published I believe. There is something about it that pushes almost all my buttons. I will put it one of the 5 favorite erotic stories of mine ... Hall of Fame material in this old mans household.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this.

A fucking amazing story! A bunch of my fantasies in one spot!

Great writing! It hit all my deviant desires! Thank you, Karl

Loved it. I wish we knew what was going on with the father and mother though. Was he cheating on her? Stupidly obsessed with work? Will there be a sequel exploring these unknowns?

I think this is one of the best stories on literotica, the slow build, the dynamics. Outstanding story!

One of the best stories I've ever read on Literotica! The silly, sexy banter between the three characters is exactly what I would think for a close, loving family. The story was not too long because it was so intertaining. The first of your's that I've read but hope you have lots more on here.

This is the second of your stories I've read, and they just get better. Please keep writing, and I'll keep reading. And a postscript for Anonymous 8 months ago: When did anal sex between a man and a woman become gay? Methinks the esteemed critic doesn't quite grasp the connotation of the word.

One of the best stories and I hope for more chapters with the 3 of them.

Amazing story! Had me on the edge of my seat. I imagined that I was Kelly with my own brother and mother! Please, more of this story!

This was one of the best stories I have read. I had a hardon during the whole damn thing. Very well written and VERY sexy!!

Best or top 10 in many categories:

photography,

mom-son,

bro-sis,

threesomes,

cuckolding

Thanks for this!

Any updates on the new story? Back in July you mentioned that you were working on a new story(which I’m hoping is a sequel or a continuation of the story).

good story, but IMO about 4 times longer then it needs to be. Keep writting

I absolutely hate gay anal in these stories. And usually all written could have been done in three pages with a really good writer.

So hot. Enjoyed everything about this story. Well done.

Don’t like the talk of involving the dad at the end but otherwise great story

Holy crap! I'm late to the party, but hot damn! What a HOT story!!!

I loved it! Now, you have to like incest-based stories, and as a guy with a HOT cousin, I do!

Thi story is OUSTANDING! I know it has been a while, but I would LOVE a part two. One day.

Cheers!

This was an incredible story with a fantastic build up and even better climax, scuse the pun. As a semi-professional photographer who has done boudoir shoots this is a great fantasy. Not perhaps with family members but I have had the good fortune to work with some beautiful ladies. The opportunity to get to the same outcome but I look back and think if only.............

Fantastic writing.

Great story. Hits many fantasy points. Maybe a 2nd chapter, please! Jason decides in addition to the last photo he will also leave one of the photos of Mom in the black bra, panties and stockings on Dad's camera. When Dad returns from China he wants to join in the family fun.