All Comments on 'Double Exposure'

Oh yeah, great story. The one part that did give me pause though was the need to keep repeating the "pretend" scenario. Not really a detractor though. 5***** . . . .

He had stripped down to his boxers at the beginning of the shoot, but then was fully dressed when he told his mother to unbuckle his pants?

Small bubble burst on an otherwise sharply written tale.

One of the best stories I have read

Very nice work 10⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

A nice slow buildup and an intense conclusion (great climax was the phrase that first came to mind, but I really shouldn't inflict such a pun on your reading public, so I won't.)

Wow, nothing left out! I believe this to be an older one but still intense. Thank you

OMG! I hate when mom/son stories feature a sister, but this was unbelievably hot! LOVED the bit where they started to "pretend" to be sexual and ended up with a blowjob! Brilliantly done, 10/10!

Great Story!

Only very few stories have thrilled me like this one.

I hope that I can write some day as good as you!

Please go on with you great work!

Just EXCELLENT!

That was an incredible experience to read!

I loved the slow teasing build up! I wish there was a part 2!

So hot and over the top it makes climbing Everest look like a Sunday stroll. 5 + "fivourite!"

Please keep writing Scribbleskillz, you're the best author out there!! No Doubt!! I really enjoy your stories!! Thank you....

So the last picture is both mother and daughter laying there with cum splatter across their boobs? A divorce in the making? Guess mom's had enough of limp dick husband. Very hot story five stars

(5/20/2023) This was Hot and I gave it five stars, but I have one critique. While the climax was great the setup seemed a bit long, IMO. I would think with such a detailed setup the story should have been longer with several more romps while hubby was away and back from his trip. The hubby could have been cuckold more and I wouldn’t have liked Kelly doing hubby. This was Jason’s harem, IMO. Happy wife happy life. You snooze, you lose.

erotic story, liked it very much,

hottest thing I’ve read since Anais Nin

I knew where the story was heading from the start but your slow and seductive build up made the journey great fun. How could Dad resist such a hot wife? We may never know and that was part of the fun as well. I would love to read more about your kinky family. Very well done.

A crazy good story that was well told. Not rushed, but also not too long. Great job!

Fabulous! Bravo!

❤❤🔥🔥🔥🔥

This is one of my biggest fantasies. Thanks for sharing your exemplary writing skills and imagination. Five-star!

Hot! Not my favorite genre, but so erotic that I just had to add it to my favorites. I really got my blood pumping and my breathing increasing. Mom seems to have been denied sex for a long time. I would have liked to have a hint as to what is going on between Mom and Dad.

What an extremely sexy story. 5 stars.

To Anon (I'll pass): WHAT gay anal?????? this was MFF. Have you got your head up YOUR ass???????

That was without doubt, one of the best stories I have ever read on Literotica. Great plot and character development. Sexy as hell.

Great writing but ending seemed rushed. One of the.bestk though. Didn't get the reluctance of son throu!by this.

God it's so frustrating when you have these stupid stories where the Cuck brother or whatever fucks around for 90% of the story because he's sooooooo conflicted such a load of BULLSHIT

Great story. Hits many fantasy points. Maybe a 2nd chapter, please! Jason decides in addition to the last photo he will also leave one of the photos of Mom in the black bra, panties and stockings on Dad's camera. When Dad returns from China he wants to join in the family fun.

Fantastic writing.

This was an incredible story with a fantastic build up and even better climax, scuse the pun. As a semi-professional photographer who has done boudoir shoots this is a great fantasy. Not perhaps with family members but I have had the good fortune to work with some beautiful ladies. The opportunity to get to the same outcome but I look back and think if only.............

Holy crap! I'm late to the party, but hot damn! What a HOT story!!!

I loved it! Now, you have to like incest-based stories, and as a guy with a HOT cousin, I do!

Thi story is OUSTANDING! I know it has been a while, but I would LOVE a part two. One day.

Cheers!

Don’t like the talk of involving the dad at the end but otherwise great story

So hot. Enjoyed everything about this story. Well done.

I absolutely hate gay anal in these stories. And usually all written could have been done in three pages with a really good writer.

good story, but IMO about 4 times longer then it needs to be. Keep writting

Any updates on the new story? Back in July you mentioned that you were working on a new story(which I’m hoping is a sequel or a continuation of the story).

Best or top 10 in many categories:

photography,

mom-son,

bro-sis,

threesomes,

cuckolding

Thanks for this!

This was one of the best stories I have read. I had a hardon during the whole damn thing. Very well written and VERY sexy!!

Amazing story! Had me on the edge of my seat. I imagined that I was Kelly with my own brother and mother! Please, more of this story!

One of the best stories and I hope for more chapters with the 3 of them.

This is the second of your stories I've read, and they just get better. Please keep writing, and I'll keep reading. And a postscript for Anonymous 8 months ago: When did anal sex between a man and a woman become gay? Methinks the esteemed critic doesn't quite grasp the connotation of the word.

One of the best stories I've ever read on Literotica! The silly, sexy banter between the three characters is exactly what I would think for a close, loving family. The story was not too long because it was so intertaining. The first of your's that I've read but hope you have lots more on here.

I think this is one of the best stories on literotica, the slow build, the dynamics. Outstanding story!

Loved it. I wish we knew what was going on with the father and mother though. Was he cheating on her? Stupidly obsessed with work? Will there be a sequel exploring these unknowns?

Great writing! It hit all my deviant desires! Thank you, Karl

A fucking amazing story! A bunch of my fantasies in one spot!

3rd time I've read this story...once just after it was first published I believe. There is something about it that pushes almost all my buttons. I will put it one of the 5 favorite erotic stories of mine ... Hall of Fame material in this old mans household.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this.

for the heads up. I'll pass....

Woow. Lovely story. Need more

I pass on the gay stories.

Beautiful build up, unbelievably real, I think it is easily one of the top three stories here, if not THE top story.

Whilst I would love for it to get a sequel I would counsel against it. I fear it would only detract from the powerful emotions of mother and children in this story.

Your story was great and exciting all the way to the ending.You have to write a sequel were he takes his mother anally and some of other things his sister described doing between the three of them.

very erotic story. unbelievably hot and sexy. i wish you were still writing and posting to this site. your work is excellent.

A superb story all the comments are correct hot hot very hot

Thank you so much

Love the way you write.

First one of yours I've read, and I got to say, I've read hundreds of incest stories one here, and this is easily in the top 5 hottest stories I've read. It has definitely sparked my imagination, and it will bode well for my future stories. I will give you credit when the time comes because you deserve it. I truly believe you are great at this and I look forward to reading more of your work. THANK YOU.

Just perfect what a wonderful story everything I wish I could have wrote myself

You should write a continuing story with the same characters. Add a little of the dad!

I'd love more of this story and I hope he gets both women pregnant. Maybe the next day the mum will tell her kids about their dad and his barely legal pregnant secretary. And they decide to drug them and break them. So after the dad gets back they invite his secretary over for dinner and feed them both a powerful afrodesiac while they give the dad something to knock him out for a little while. When he comes to he is tied naked to a chair with his daughter balls deep on his cock while his wife and son use and abuse his girlfriend eventually making her the son's fucktoy and breeding slave.

What a long fucking great story. Loved it.

This is the best story i've ever read in here. I've been wanting to write a story about events in my past. This is a true inspiration. My cock was throbbing with anticipation from start to finish.

From beginning to end wonderfully erotic

Had this one in my queue for quite a while, and I'm glad I finally got around to it! It'd be super cool to see some of your writing again!

...there would be a sequel. This story deserves one!

"God she tasted good: Somewhere between a warm peach on a summer day and that saltiness of skin after a dip in the ocean."

Great story. Wonderful buildup. I think a second chapter/part involving Daddy would be great. And is needed

If Ecstasy is great happiness and or Joyful excitement and fulfillment Then this almost says enough about how I enjoyed this story. This was the equivalent of 12 hours playing with a blindfolded woman with feathers, vibrators and toys until at last the game was over and it was Hide and Seek with the salami. When Kelly wanted to deal a hand in the game it spiked again. Great story, Loved it. When do you think they can increase the number of stars available???

PS: def got skillz and big brass ones. Cheers

THAT was HOT !

Sizzling in fact, just wonderful !

Rapier

FUCK! that ending was hot!!! Well done

but

I'll never understand why an otherwise we'll written sexual saga will take 9 pages to tease and take tentative tiny steps approaching but not crossing the ultimate taboo line, but in 1 page breach the moat with a v itaulting pole u

It's been almost three years since I first read this story and it still gets me off. Too bad you haven't written on the site in a couple of years. I'd love to see what happened when the dad got back from China.

I'd love to see more chapters to this story as well, but I'm wondering if this person has retired from writing for Literotica. It's been over 2 years since his last new story. To be fair, I'm not a writer, but I know that writing a story, especially a good one can take a long time, and I'm sure he has plenty of other things in his life to deal with, so I certainly don't want him to feel pressured.

I loved your story from the beginning to the end . The husband neglecting his wife is not unique . Sometimes it's a health issue or he gets so involved with work that wife and family use fade into the horizon , and sometimes he's just a ass . I would like to see a chapter where Jason permanently takes care of both Mother and Sisters sexual needs .

Great story little longer than I normally like but it grab me. And the ending very hot but damn. Ready for more chapters

You had a great story going and then you totally screwed it up when you had the sister ask her brother to butt fuck her. Don't understand why anyone would screw up a good story with something like this. I won't be wasting any more of my time reading any more of your stories. Good bye.

The old guy

Please continue with a new spark and repair from dad. And whole family.

Loved Loved Loved it! Please continue the story I know it's been about two years but this story is too good not to continue but please have the line about keeping the photo on the camera be a passive aggressive joke against her husband for neglecting her and not a serious request.

Great story. I hope there's a follow-up that brings the sister into a more active role. It would also be nice to repair the relationship between the dad and mom - and perhaps involve the rest of the family in interesting ways.

It has been a very long time since I've came across a quality story like yours that involved a threesome between the mom, son, and daughter. A story where the brother and sister make a plan to seduce and fuck their mom. I really miss that. This was a hot story and I can't wait to see what others you might have.

Nailed it! Everything a Photo shoot story should be. One of the best stories I have read.

Pretty hot, though the last sentence where his mom asked him to leave the last picture doesn't make much sense, though funny, shocking hos father with the rampant incest that has been going on seem awfully risky, and that someone has been fucking both his wife and daughter, maybe he wouldn't mind, but the thought of the dad joining them is a bit of a turnoff. I realise that it was probably intended as a joke, but it's a weird place to end it.

Also it seems like the author completely forgot about what earlier seemed a significant plot element, the fact that the parents' marriage is in trouble, something that was kinda left on wayside. The son should have been more curious about that, also, Kelly was convinced that it was her father's fault, or at least only her mom deserved any sympathy, but neither seemed to actually investigate or so much as ask about what problems their parents might have..

Absolutely the max; great story and a skilled writer as well. Two thumbs up...Way up!

Very well written. Good story line and buildup. Good descriptions and lots of teasing before the events. You could do worse than do a continuation.

Best plot build up ever ! I truly enjoyed it, thank you.

That ending was hilarious. Me and my mom thought it was great...

Would love to see a continuation of this story.

Failing that, use Jason and Kelly together without Mom.

Maybe they could both go back to the sushi restaurant, and Jason could ask that waitress to do a photo shoot, with Kelly 'assisting' of course.

you are awesome. best suspense build up i have ever seen. Now, when is part 2 coming out. 10 pages is not enough. lol.

I just wish it had stayed as a romantic love story instead of going to such extremes.

Loved the story, but I especially loved the ending! that was rich!

Really well done and would love to know what the dads deal was.

Very well written story best I have read on this site so far.

This was one of the best stories I've ever read online, more would be great

WOW!!!!!

Awesome story! Nice work and thanks!

The best I've read on the site. Look forward to more.

Well !! I was quote upset when I didn't check to see how long this story was,, but I was already hooked so I couldn't stop until I got to the end. But hay, I didn't need to sleep tonight anyway... Just hope my hubby isn't so asleep that I can't wake him. Lets just see how sleepy he is ??? Oh wow,, that always works !! Good night folks, got to take care of some important business now.... Thanks for the story and will be looking for another from Scribbleskillz......

You are one of the few authors who understands the forbidden allure of incest fantasy. The initial reluctance, the dirty incest talk and nasty addiction that prevents them from stopping. This is incest.

Could not stop reading until the end. Very well crafted.

great story one of the best iv'e read on here in quite a while hope you continue this story would like to see where it goes from here

Fantastic story this is how these should all be written!!!

Sadly this is the first story this guy has written in 4 years so it might be a while before we see another one..but i'm sure it'll be worth the wait.

The very best I have read in thirty years. Please add to the story with a follow up. Thanks

Awesome story. Well developed. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue with another chapter ;)