All Comments on 'Down the Rabbit Hole'

A wonderful and erotica scene and it is cheapened by the out of place and unnecessary use of the whore/slut crap. It did not fit the rest of the scene. The derogatory names alone would be enough to cause Addie's negative feelings about what he thinks of her. He should be celebrating having a sensual woman, not smearing her character. And the worn out argument that she's HIS whore, HIS slut never makes it a positive thing. Yeah, some women get into that, many, many more don't. Your Addie, as written, seems very much one who doesn't. Danny needs to change up his dirty talk.

I enjoyed this immensely. Please write more!