All Comments on 'Dragon Clans Bk. 01 Pt. 15'

Great story!

Dies irae dies illa, Solvet saeclum in favilla: Teste David cum Sybilla - You just did it again - oh how I hate to wait /13

This is such an explosive chapter. I was on tentahooks all the way through. you have managed to continue with great character development throughout an initially action driven scenario. Descriptions of feelings around friendship, newly acknowldged love, potential loss and hatred are realistically expressed in this chapter. The intrigue and tension between Nicholas and Ian feels like it is reaching fever pitch. Michaels expression of love for both Valerie and Tara threw me at the end. I can't wait to read the next installment.

This story has so many elements that move me. The characters are amazingly developed, the scenes are vivid and the interactions between characters are engaging. Please continue....very soon!

The last two -- possibly three but definitely two -- installments reflect a MARKED improvement in the grammar and so forth issues which many readers noted. In fact, my enjoyment of the last two installments was never interrupted by any picky grammar issues. Instead, the prose flowed. Congratulations!

Terrific story!

I love y0ur writing please continue this is a good story

You have been making marked improvement and at this point I am hooked to your every word. Keep up the good work

Thanks for posting!