Dragon (S)Layers Ch. 25

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Her toes weren't even touching the floor any more, pinned to the counter by her husband. She quivered under him enjoying the sensation of being completely full once more. Gods it had been too long. Ithric seemed to enjoy it, too, he pumped into her a little more, kissing her neck. "Thank you, Daddy. . ." she whispered.

"Good girl."

"Good girl!" Lostariel said brightly. Both Sarah and Ithric looked over in panic.

"Oh shit-" Sarah tried to stop herself but it was too late. Their daughter's bright green- or were they blue? Maybe brown- eyes were focused upon them. Sarah felt this sense of confusion as a tangible thing, stirring her mind to wander.

"Your fault," Ithric was saying, but Sarah was looking at their daughter. Something was wrong- her mind was trying to replace features. No, she was trying to find the features that belonged to their daughter. She couldn't remember what the girl looked like! Sarah blinked, now aware of this discrepancy. Aware and panicked.

She rose as Ithric did, finding that nothing was quite as she remembered it. Sure the day was right, sure the events were right, but something was missing. Something odd. She didn't remember what her own daughter looked like- had it been olive oil or vegetable oil?

Sarah became aware she was dreaming right as she woke up.

It did nothing to ease her panic, though; she awoke with a start, falling off the bench with a tremendous thud.

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PtmcPilotPtmcPilotover 3 years ago
You are

a great writer! Reading this now in mid 2020 and loving the depth of this story.

T_SilverwolfT_Silverwolfabout 8 years agoAuthor
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Thank you guys for your feedback, I see that there are some things I still need to iron out but this kind of stuff helps me see where those problems are and how I might be able to refine things in the future. . . I'll keep an eye on it going forward, and I hope you enjoy what comes out as a result of it. I posted an explanation below under some major spoiler tag.

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SERIOUSLY, SPOILER... LAST WARNING************

Right, so, Sarah's family died before the books start-- they were killed by (she believes) an invention she created, a flying ship. With Ithric, her husband, and Lostariel, her daughter lost on the coast of an island off the shores of 'the end of the world'. But it would seem that the daughter survived by some turn of fate that's explained in volume 5. So yes. . . She didn't know, obviously. Neither of them do.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
??

Was this past or future? Was this a look into Sara's past? Was an attack that caused her to take the future path she did? Was the young assassin that Sara fucked her daughter? Every jump in chapters just adds more questions. I hope this gets somewhere soon because it is really confusing at the moment.

hakdrakkenhakdrakkenalmost 9 years ago

That wasn't baffling at all. Really,

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