All Comments on 'Draxon Ch. 02: Awakening'

by PrettyKittyKaty

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
You are...

AMAZING!!!

Please keep writing! I thought your haunted house story was your best work, but this - this is even better. (Not that I don't want more of your haunted house story :-)

Looking forward to more of your stories!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Fun but...

While I love the theme of this series, there's definitely some /r/badwomensanatomy going on (of course, it *is* fantasy). I also feel like this could be improved by adding in some foreplay and making the sex scenes last a bit longer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
love it

i love it so much , keep writing about this, i kinda want draxon to fall in love with her and protect her from things but also use her as a fuck slave

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