by PrettyKittyKaty
AMAZING!!!
Please keep writing! I thought your haunted house story was your best work, but this - this is even better. (Not that I don't want more of your haunted house story :-)
Looking forward to more of your stories!
While I love the theme of this series, there's definitely some /r/badwomensanatomy going on (of course, it *is* fantasy). I also feel like this could be improved by adding in some foreplay and making the sex scenes last a bit longer.
i love it so much , keep writing about this, i kinda want draxon to fall in love with her and protect her from things but also use her as a fuck slave