by Novacaine
You are to be commended for your OUTSTANDING choice of plot and writing style. This is the way that all marriages should be able to be lived...when a desire is felt for another of the opposite sex, lawfully wedded matrimony should not be allowed to stand in the way. These people that you have created know true freedom and love toward each other, yet remain comitted to their legal spouses and children. This is a definite utopian lifestyle.
commentor is correct to a point. Eventually, these kind of people crash and burn leaving many innocent victoms in pain and sorrow.