All Comments on 'Dream Vacation Pt. 07'

I've been very impressed with this series. You've taken the time to help us get to know Xavier as a person while still giving us some very good sex scenes. You've also let us see the women, especially Trina, as women and not just sex objects. Keep it coming!

Your character development is excellent and the pacing of your story should satisfy almost anyone. And, some seriously hot sex! One thing, and it's a quibble, but detracted slightly from my enjoyment of the story--your first page appears to be in a MUCH larager font size, and perhaps a different font, than the rest. Also, a few minor typos, and believe me, I understand how hard it is to catch all of them. Quibbles aside, though, bravo!

Love this story.