All Comments on 'Dream Vacations'

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cyzrecyzreabout 16 years ago
Very interesting

Very interesting, where do I get this drug? Seriously, good job, a few minor errors - misused words, but not enough to distract from the story. I look forward to more stories - maybe the genius can find a way to link two peoples dreams together? Imagine someone with a cuckold fantasy who doesn't want to live it in real ife - he can experience in his dreams together with his wife.... Keep writing!

phil2213phil2213over 11 years ago
great start where is, he story???

I read this well written somewhat introduction to a great story and then it ended.

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

One part they left off this author was a brain.

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