All Comments on 'Dressed up for Halloween'

Good story. I could have used some more sex but it was still very good. Short stories like this encourage me to finally write.

Loved it, please write more

Brilliant story, shame it ended so soon. Need more please

A bit weak on the setup, but, damn hot.

"You wanna carry my baby bitch"?

I'm straight, and only ever touched a buddy's penis once. Women are right for me. But if I ever meet a dude confident enough to take me and breed like this, I would happily spread my legs wide for him and answer, "yes".

too short, erratic........ almost like they were jerking off while writing

And that's a divorce. If that's how your wife sees and treats you, who would want to stay married to the bitch?

Fun story and I do love stories where a wife sets up her husband to get fucked while she watches and enjoys. However, slowdown please, draw out and detail the action, add more emotion and drama…make the story longer, erotic and more enjoyable. Otherwise, great story…a must read!

Loved the story. Was there a follow up story? Would like to know what happened between the wife and husband after.