All Comments on 'Dylan's Learns the Truth'

I can't wait to read more about Ash and Dylan.

Again, compleatly outstanding.

I guess, this is the end of this story. It looks like finishing with Dylan was bad idea. It did not get a lot of comments. It looks like it has been read and favorited but no one felt compelled to say why. This feels like a good place to end it tho, so I hope everyone that read it did get some enjoyment out of it.

Well yes a good place to stop but I'd not write them off all together, let it stay in the background of your mind and you can always come back to it. I find it so easy to relate to these people and the experience, has to be the sign of a good story well written I am enjoying the incest kink a lot, very very hot topic and so well portrayed. I'd like to see another chapter with Ash and Dylan and there is also the options for introducing other kinks if you so desire, MFM etc, just a thought

Jean

I'm usually not one for the group sex thing, but you keep it flowing nicely. I truly enjoyed both stories.

this needed to be told through dylan's eyes. it really didnt make sense to be told through his cousins. to me it made it harder to follow because we really didnt get to hear his views on anything other then "a very weird talk" and "he understands" which none is explained.