All Comments on 'Dysfunctional Love'

Wished it was longer but so far, I'm very interested to see this play out:-)

Sorry, but another story of cheaters. Really, even considering seeing him is a waste of time and I can already see where it's going.

Would like to see where it goes....

Possibilities.

There is not enough story to give a fair assessment. Hopefully, chapter 2 will be longer. But good bones so far, you just need more meat. Good luck.

Keep writing. I want to see where this goes.

young love full of angst

he cheated, cheated, cheated--even made a baby with someone else

he goes away for a while

she has moved on--even made a baby with someone else

The End

Oh my gawd where is the rest. This story has so much potential and I'd love to see where this goes

To begin, this is not a story... yet. Only a dry summary of the beginning of a story. Next, it repeats this well-established among Literotica authors nonsense about olive-coloroured skins. These people have obvioulsly never seen olive trees, olives or olive oil for that matter... When immature olives are (olive) green and when mature very dark brown with a purplish hue, or straight black. Now, do any of these match the skin colour of hindo-europeans (white folk)? Definitely not but the nonsense carries on...